Activity for User 992 - Emil Davidzuk - drzuk@sbcglobal.net

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62 Mar 25 Reply Chris

In my first rendition I tried to highlight the glass block windows, but I failed to really create a place to rest your eye as you correctly noted.

I went back and added more shadows and removed the wiring that led you out of the frame that Michael commented on. I tried doing a horizontal flip but it didn't look right.

Regards

Emil

Mar 27th
62 Mar 25 Comment Mark,

Great street scene. Small changes will make it pop

I simply reduced the exposure 3/4 of a stop of your image to bring down the background which helps to keep your eyes on the people

Emil

Mar 17th
62 Mar 25 Reply Michael

Good move, missed that detail

Thanks

Emil		 Mar 17th
62 Mar 25 Comment Michael,

Well seen. I like the beach goers flanking your subject - which is positioning favorably in your image.

Well done

Emil		 Mar 1st
62 Mar 25 Comment Adrian,

You dir a masterful job of pulling your subject out of the shadows. Positioning her to right of frame is perfect. Having the vendor in the shadows is also a good choice

My eye sees the 7/8 "hot" bananas though . They have lost some detail and probably need to be brought down a some. It may require a PS layer to fix them and then a mask.

Regards

Emil

Mar 1st
62 Mar 25 Comment Pete

I like what you did here. The building has great texture and jumps off the frame to the viewer. It has a foreboding air to it.

No improvements needed from my eyes.

Emil

Mar 1st
4 comments - 2 replies for Group 62
66 Mar 25 Comment Gary,

Nice wide angle vista of the pacific. Your processing brings the viewers eye to the lighthouse on the hill side.

I wish you had used longer lens on the lighthouse.

Emil 		Mar 19th
66 Mar 25 Comment Melanie

I liked the scale of your original so rendered it into BW. I removed a few things here and there in my rendition.

I noticed a few sensor spots in the clouds that are also in your BW image and there are light areas in the sky behind both trees that are not in the original?

Regards

Emil		 Mar 2nd
66 Mar 25 Comment Charles,

I like it and it is a great time to of year to experiment. It does not have the IR look our group posts but I think the owner has dibs on the rendering style.

Although the bird adds a wildlife element, it is pretty small in the scheme of things.

Regards

Emil		 Mar 2nd
66 Mar 25 Comment Jack

The rocks need more light and the path could use a touch more as well.

The path is your lead into the frame and the area above it where the path "disappears" could be dodged a bit. I also used a linear gradient on the rocks to open them up a bit. Here is my cut at it

Regards

Emil		 Mar 2nd
66 Mar 25 Comment Henry,

Fabulous shot.

The straight lines of the Church against the randomness of the terrain and sky is what draws my eye.

Nicely done

Emil 		Mar 2nd
66 Mar 25 Comment Arik

This would be a classic shot if it only had the Mail Pouch barn; it would be a classic shot if it were just the old cars. Combined it is just off the charts in my humble opinion.

Regards

Emil		 Mar 2nd
66 Mar 25 Reply Charles

Great suggestions. I will update my submission accordingly

Thanks

Emil		 Mar 1st
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