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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 62 |
Apr 24 |
Comment |
Israel,
I like the direction Adrian is going with his updates. They add punch to your speedboat scene
Emil |
Apr 17th |
| 62 |
Apr 24 |
Comment |
Mandy
Congratulations to you for having your work selected for the members showcase. Awesome shot
Emil |
Apr 17th |
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| 62 |
Apr 24 |
Reply |
Pete
My comment to add a little canvas in my first response was really intended for Israel's version. I apologize for my senior moment
Emil |
Apr 17th |
| 62 |
Apr 24 |
Reply |
Adrian
My apologies for not adding my rendition in my previous comment.
I think your image would benefit immensely from heavy blacks and whites but as always tempered by your thoughts as to where the limits should be
I like what you created
Emil |
Apr 16th |
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| 62 |
Apr 24 |
Comment |
Adrian
I am a fan of simple images and this yours is very well executed.
Your subject is clear, the triangular hill leads you to the tree etc. Square crop is spot on.
Two thoughts. I set the white and black points using the LR develop module to help the contrast and I added a linear gradient at the top to keep the view eye down.
Regards
Emil |
Apr 16th |
| 62 |
Apr 24 |
Comment |
mandy
I will have to Google Uchisar Castle..
My thought is your image needs to be crafted to create a place for the eye to rest I feel.
My rendition relies on the "face" in the castle.
Regards
Emil |
Apr 16th |
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| 62 |
Apr 24 |
Comment |
Mark
I like your rendering here very much. Your subject is the scene outside as the Knights would have back when and the interior is secondary but with enough light to see the detail.
Well done
Emil |
Apr 16th |
| 62 |
Apr 24 |
Comment |
Pete,
Another great portrait from the Tattoo Expo.
The faint stripe adds a little accent to the backdrop so it is not something that draws your eye away from the strong gentleman you have captured. My thought is to add a little canvas to the top the frame so his cap is not so close to it
You have a knack for capturing people they truly are.
Regards
Emil |
Apr 16th |
6 comments - 2 replies for Group 62
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| 66 |
Apr 24 |
Comment |
Henry,
Great IR scene anchored by the willow. I too feel the path adds value to your composition
I made a few subtle additions. I darkened the path, I put a radial gradient over the willow and increased the highlights, increased clarity and dehaze.
Regards
Emil |
Apr 17th |
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| 66 |
Apr 24 |
Comment |
Jack
I opened up the detail in the stone ruins using Detail Extractor at 60% opacity for an alternate rendition.
Regards
Emil |
Apr 17th |
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| 66 |
Apr 24 |
Comment |
Charles
I believe a number of your concerns can be addressed potentially.
I cropped your image so I could focus on the water feature. I used generative fill on the slime covered water just above the last falls and it removed the unwanted stuff floating there and then i burned it. I selected the falls below and dodged them to contrast with the water. I did the same to the rocks below the fall just not to the same degree. I darkened the rocks on either side of the water feature as well.
Regards
Emil |
Apr 17th |
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| 66 |
Apr 24 |
Comment |
Pallie
This is eye candy.
Emil |
Apr 16th |
| 66 |
Apr 24 |
Comment |
Melanie
I played with your IR image and darkened the leaves using a couple of LR radial gradients. I think it helps and if you can keep the flowers a little "hotter" and in detail than the leaves I think it would work..I don't have enough pixels to get where I want to go.
Emil
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Apr 16th |
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| 66 |
Apr 24 |
Comment |
Gary
A slice of Indiana americana for sure...I wish the roof was not so new it resets the clock you so masterfully turned back...
Emil |
Apr 16th |
| 66 |
Apr 24 |
Comment |
Aril
I love your rendering here Erik. The simplicity is elegant. The border distracts however.
Regards
Emil |
Apr 16th |
7 comments - 0 replies for Group 66
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13 comments - 2 replies Total
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