Activity for User 992 - Emil Davidzuk - drzuk@sbcglobal.net

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62 Oct 23 Reply One thing I forgot was a tighter crop....

Regards

Emil		 Oct 5th
62 Oct 23 Comment Israel

Dynamite Shot, Love the mood and the window light

I did two simple mods

1) I did a select subject (your model) in LR Classic and increased the exposure and shadows (+.75 and -15 respectively) I then reduced the highlights to remove the hot spots on the models legs

2) I selected the subject again, clicked invert and reduced the exposure by -.85 to darkens the room.

Thoughts

Emil		 Oct 5th
62 Oct 23 Comment Bob

Dynamite shot with incredible texture

Food thought: In LR Classic I brushed the interior wall and darkened it some to creat separation with wall closest to the camera, I then brushed that wall and increased texture and lightened a touch.

Regards

Emil		 Oct 5th
62 Oct 23 Comment Hi Pete

Four layers of interest in your shot when you study it closely.

I thought each layer could benefit from a little LR tool magic..

I placed a linear grad on the rocks to increase clarity,
brushed the deciduous tress to increase the exposure to contrast with the firs, placed a radial grad over the mountains increased clarity and dehaze, selected the sky increased contrast and dehaze, placed a linear grad over the sky and trees to increase clarity and finally placed radial grad over the Sun rays in upper right to decrease exposure and increase clarity

Food for thought

Regards

Emil		 Oct 5th
62 Oct 23 Comment Bunny

I just ordered the iPhone 15 Pro. They are amazing devices no question.

I like your pattern image, particularly the diagonal orientation.

In the second row from the top there is something in the second opening on the right that I would remove.

Well seen

Regards

Emil		 Oct 5th
62 Oct 23 Reply Thank you Pete Oct 3rd
4 comments - 2 replies for Group 62
66 Oct 23 Comment Henry,

Well seen. Camera position is perfect with the he narrow canal leading us into your image

I also appreciate your detailed writeup

Well done this month

Emil		 Oct 6th
66 Oct 23 Comment Gary

You always manage to create an image that I would never have imagined. I think this one is particularly artful and pleasing to my eye

Keep em coming

Emil		 Oct 6th
66 Oct 23 Comment Charles,

Great minds think alike. this month. Nice scene, great clouds.

I like Palli's suggestion, It breaks up the foreground, adds depth

Regards

Emil		 Oct 6th
66 Oct 23 Comment Jack

Wonderful scene

My thoughts are to remove the leftmost cyclist and the tall palms, no crop

Regards

Emil		 Oct 6th
66 Oct 23 Comment Arik

Considering the location, this is an expensive shot....Perfect camera position. No border needed

Regards

Emil		 Oct 6th
66 Oct 23 Comment Palli

Well seen. The vertical fence lines, the tree texture and the plants make for an interesting mix.

I could not pass by the opportunity to process your shot.

Regards

Emil

Oct 6th
66 Oct 23 Comment Melanie

I love this humanity image. The joy in the kids comes right through to me.

Regards

Emil		 Oct 5th
66 Oct 23 Reply Henry

Good idea

Thanks

Emil		 Oct 5th
66 Oct 23 Comment All

After taking on board your comments, Here is my final cut

Thanks for your thoughts, my Local Farm image is better as a result

Emil		 Oct 4th
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