Activity for User 989 - Jason Kravitz - jason@aminus3.com

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78 Dec 22 Comment Great you were able to get a photo of this from the window. I think your edit does a good job at isolating to the core subject. I like the color version with the vivid green of her dress. Dec 11th
78 Dec 22 Comment Talk about the city growing up around the building. Looks like such a strange beacon from a bygone era in comparison to the modern high rises.

Great light on the buildings. I like the color version but did agree with Brenda's comments on the sharpening. Your 2nd color version is better.

You could also make an alternate version with a tighter crop and still retain the modern look of the other buildings while bringing more focus ot the old building. Here's a quick suggestion to get a visual, but maybe even tighter with a wide format aspect ratio.
Dec 9th
78 Dec 22 Reply Thanks Brenda. There's not much to street or people photography, just point the camera and click :) Dec 9th
78 Dec 22 Reply thanks Sunil Dec 9th
78 Dec 22 Comment Great idea, still life, and story behind the image. I love that they reconnected again, all those years later.

"Sarah My Love" seems like a better title to me (or maybe "Dearest Sarah?")

I feel like the crop is a little tight though I get what you are doing to minimize the floor. I think it would be better with more space around the edges, though maybe need to do some creative cloning / background replacement if you don't think it fits.

Dec 5th
78 Dec 22 Comment I was thinking the same as Sunil on cropping in a little tighter.

I like how the building looks a little like a locomotive.
Dec 5th
78 Dec 22 Comment Feels like you could come in a little tighter to me and still keep the same feel of the image. I'm still undecided on the color.

It adds a unique element but maybe a bit too much? Maybe go about halfway between the two?
Dec 3rd
78 Dec 22 Comment Incredible to see these powerful creatures in their natural habitat. He almost looks like he is yawning after a little multi-month power nap.

I'm gonna kick it off with the near cliche but potentially effective idea to do a flip horizontal. I feel like reading left to right we see the more docile bear and then it leads our eye to the one with the open jaw. I also am not so convinced on the crop, even though it keeps the shadow, I feel like you have a more powerful composition by coming in even tighter on your bears.

20k photos - wow! Your poor hard drive :) I just returned from a trip with about 2500 photos and feels quite challenging to get through, 20k is just wow.
Dec 1st

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