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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 78 |
Mar 19 |
Reply |
Rays centered left to right NOT top to bottom. |
Mar 25th |
| 78 |
Mar 19 |
Reply |
Brenda,
Very nice indeed, although not quite centered which I think is important. |
Mar 24th |
| 78 |
Mar 19 |
Comment |
Great shot. I love it just the way you presented it. Side by side verts seems a little forced to me. |
Mar 13th |
| 78 |
Mar 19 |
Comment |
Jason,
Nice moon shot. I would suggest moving the moon to where you want it. Here it is on a separate layer and can be moved anywhere. I placed it here and crop it a bit. What do you think. |
Mar 12th |
 |
| 78 |
Mar 19 |
Comment |
Richard,
Neat shot. I tightened the crop a little and burned in the upper-center-left. Don't know if it helps but that's my two cents. A very engaging shot. |
Mar 9th |
 |
| 78 |
Mar 19 |
Comment |
Like everyone else, I Love your B&W conversion. I think I would keep all of the people. loosing them is one of our big problems these days (especially the young ones). I would leave the tree but take out the branches in the sky. I think removing the whole tree leaves awkward negative space and leave the bricks looking off and their right in the foreground. Beautiful conversion! |
Mar 9th |
| 78 |
Mar 19 |
Comment |
We normally see our sports shots sharp. Not think the soft focus works here. I like the legs. That way the kid doesn't look so alone. I don't think the rule of thirds works for you here. Good capture. Hard for me to look at. Maybe that's good. |
Mar 8th |
| 78 |
Mar 19 |
Comment |
Brenda,
Really nice work. Such an ambitious project with beautiful results. I think centering the subject brings tranquility to your shot. So Jason's crop is perfect. Having the background visible implies, to me, the joining earth and inner piece. If I were you I would work a little more on your slimming technique. The rim glow is not consistent from armpit to thigh. |
Mar 7th |
| 78 |
Mar 19 |
Reply |
I'll give it a try on fine art paper. I have several textures. I don't print on canvas... I have too many painter friends. |
Mar 7th |
| 78 |
Mar 19 |
Reply |
I did. What do you think? |
Mar 7th |
| 78 |
Mar 19 |
Reply |
Thanks what do you think? I moved the rock and added a little more stuff. I like it. |
Mar 7th |
 |
| 78 |
Mar 19 |
Reply |
Richard,
Here is the no rock version. I think it leaves too much negative space. I will try you other suggestion and move it and perhaps ad other stuff. |
Mar 7th |
 |
| 78 |
Mar 19 |
Comment |
Thank you everyone for your input. Sorry to be slow getting back to you. It's tax prep time and I've been under the weather. I'll work on Richard's suggestion and get back to you soon. |
Mar 7th |
7 comments - 6 replies for Group 78
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7 comments - 6 replies Total
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