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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 57 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
Luv chess and if this set was made in Japan, the pieces are probably Ivory. I agree with the others, the background in way too distracting for many reasons. Another photo session would be fun; if the Japanese lettering is on a surface that could take up the entire background that would make a great story. There is another tall piece behind the Queen, is that the King? Maybe show him in shot and use f5.6, etc to some more charters to the story. I guess since I'm nit-picking, I would like to see a little more even, diffused light on the three central figures. The specular highlights may not do well if you ever wanted print these images. |
Apr 19th |
| 57 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
Really nice image Tom, capture your story very well. Like the vertical lines in the column and rails; the pealing paint is great, it just screams decay. I am torn about the rusty pipe on the right; luv rusty stuff. Some viewers may find it distracting. |
Apr 19th |
| 57 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
Nice capture; better to capture with the setting you got than not at all. Yeah, she is very expressive, cool. I like Cindys crop. I do think the image comes across better when lightening it up some esp. if you are going to print it. But a more selective dodge and burn would work for Rylee; the look great brighter, but like those rosy cheeks just a tad darker and maybe the hair also. Parts of forehead in Cindys version look a little hot and may wash out when printed. I agree the noise doesn't really show for an ISO shot at 5000. |
Apr 19th |
| 57 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
Interesting folk art and very photo worthy. I like the color image better, I think it tells a stronger story. I agree with Cindy that the out of focus figures on the right are a distraction; the front most figure is you center of interest and should be in focus to hold the viewers attention. It's a good study in Depth of Field. Also, I think that white vertical 'bar' on the far left is also distraction. |
Apr 19th |
| 57 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
Very nice vertical composition. Purple is always nice for flower images. I think you have captured the essence of this champion bulb giving it's all. The three dropping petals on the left give a real sense of downward motion. The green V shaped leaves make for a powerful composition. |
Apr 19th |
| 57 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
Well done. Pansies do bring thoughts of Spring, although the weather here in WI just returned to winter like crap. I like the square crop and colors are great. The fold lines in the petals make nice leading lines. |
Apr 19th |
| 57 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
Thanks folks; yea didn't think about this image enough, not close up. Just got carried away. |
Apr 19th |
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