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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 78 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Abdo,
Very good portrait, fashion photography. Clearly shows the beauty of the Large size sensor. Light tightly cropped, some space above the head will look good. |
Apr 25th |
| 78 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Jason,
Good photo,
I liked the ver posted by Jim.
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Apr 25th |
| 78 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Terry,
Like the submitted image, good post processing, IMO two light patches in the top L and R corners makes it looks less natural, try removing it, may look better than the posted image. |
Apr 25th |
| 78 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Richard,
Good composition, waiting for the right movement worked. Looks perfect picture. Cooler ver looks very natural. |
Apr 25th |
| 78 |
Apr 20 |
Reply |
Jim,
I like this version, very well composed and green wall frames the picture well, IMO do no crop. Good travel picture. |
Apr 25th |
| 78 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Brenda,
Original picture is good, my views.
Composition is very good, walkway and surrounding is well captured, S curve of the path adds a lot of value to the image and keeps eyes focused on the image.
Posted image Is over saturated and looks yellowish.
Shadows are over processed and pushed to midtone level that makes image flat, highlights are well processed.
This type of image if not captured in RAW then not easy work on.
Good subject to try in BNW and try toning in light coffee color that may look good.
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Apr 13th |
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| 78 |
Apr 20 |
Reply |
Agree. |
Apr 13th |
| 78 |
Apr 20 |
Reply |
Hi Jason,
Liked what you did and looks good, but I like to remain with original data of an image and very little manipulations like dodging, burning, improving detail in shadow and highlight and some correction and removing a few things by cleaning the image, but replacing complete sky by AI capability of a software may look good but then it is not the photographer's image any more and as Brenda mentioned it can not be used for competition any more.
Out of your three try I liked the one in color and converting that in BNW will look good too. |
Apr 13th |
| 78 |
Apr 20 |
Reply |
Hi Richard,
Your suggestion is the one I liked most, it really adds value to the original image, Vertical composition with bottom heavy and lots of negative space looks well balanced, BNW will look much better will try on RAW file and post, thank you |
Apr 13th |
| 78 |
Apr 20 |
Reply |
Hi Jim,
In my view, cropping and moving the figure is not helping in improving the image, composition looks off too. |
Apr 13th |
| 78 |
Apr 20 |
Reply |
Hi Terry.
Sharpening of image adds value. Thanks for trying. |
Apr 13th |
| 78 |
Apr 20 |
Reply |
Thanks Brenda,
The original file is very poor quality, can download from the link, is large 25mb RAW file, open in Photoshop or any other RAW processing software.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/n9kx0970sw4lh8p/DSCF2230.RAF?dl=0
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Apr 1st |
5 comments - 7 replies for Group 78
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5 comments - 7 replies Total
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