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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 47 |
Jul 18 |
Reply |
I like the update Ed. It is such a subtle thing but my eyes now seem to go to the right first. |
Jul 17th |
| 47 |
Jul 18 |
Comment |
Albert this is nice landscape shot with wonderful lighting and great clarity. Sunrise or sunset maybe? There are two spots that caught my eye initially. They may be trees or sensor spots that are distracting. One is on the left ridge and the other is not quite center and 1 O'clock on the mountain side. I suggest cloning them out. Thank's for sharing a wonderful landscape. |
Jul 17th |
| 47 |
Jul 18 |
Comment |
You are welcome Jen and it is a wonderful moment in time. |
Jul 17th |
| 47 |
Jul 18 |
Reply |
Thank you so much Jen and I am glad to contribute. |
Jul 17th |
| 47 |
Jul 18 |
Comment |
Wonderful timing and capture of this moment. I would like to see more attention drawn to your subject as the tones are fairly flat across the picture. As Jack suggests more high key but also pumping up the contrast at the same time. See if you like this rendition. The composition and lines are fabulous. Again always just suggestions... Thanks for the wonderful share. |
Jul 14th |
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| 47 |
Jul 18 |
Comment |
The lighting on the cormorants wings is wonderful as well as the pose you caught. The detail captured in the wings and tail is the topping on the ice cream. The moss is also wonderful but a bit distracting. I played with a vignette based on Jacks comment...see what you think. Thank's for the beautiful share and pose. |
Jul 14th |
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| 47 |
Jul 18 |
Comment |
This is an interesting subject and as we all see differently I am distracted by the harsh white on the left hand side when viewing on the site. I downloaded the image and viewed it in On1 and the lighting appeared much nicer. I still wonder if the highlights were brought down on the left wall if the right side of most interest to me would stand out more. This is wonderfully composed and as I looked it over the on the right which reads in part "Navajo Blankets" gives this image its full sense of place. Nice share. |
Jul 14th |
| 47 |
Jul 18 |
Comment |
A very busy and interesting street corner in Paris. I like that you have slightly out of focus in foreground to pull in the eye. However; I have trouble locating a subject of this image. I did a quick crop on the image which I believe makes this stronger. There is something going on with the perspective perhaps as well that could be played with. Just a suggestion of course. Thank you for sharing the travels. |
Jul 14th |
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| 47 |
Jul 18 |
Comment |
Jack I also love these road shots and it amazes how void of people a beautiful road can be. That you chose this spot for its interest and composition works very well. It looks like there are offload tracks in the hillside on the left. I am glad you did not clone out the poles as so many do. I find no suggestions to improve either. |
Jul 14th |
| 47 |
Jul 18 |
Comment |
Jack thank you for the welcome and feedback. Feedback is always helpful to correct what is not so obvious to myself. I will made the change suggested. |
Jul 14th |
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