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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 76 |
Jun 18 |
Reply |
Barbara - I appreciate your input, I didn't see it on black when I submitted it, and understand. I also didn't know that that was acceptable, so I thank-you! |
Jun 5th |
| 76 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
There doesn't appear to haven been much (if any?) substantive change from the original image, which is well exposed. Based on the large log and height of the flame, I surmised that it is not a small fire, but I agree, without something else to give the viewer reference, it is hard to discern the size and story. |
Jun 5th |
| 76 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
It is a very good starting point. I'd perhaps change out the sky background, to add an image with more clouds. Perhaps crop the image a bit on both sides where it is tilting off. Definitely bump the colors a bit with vibrance. |
Jun 5th |
| 76 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
I really like how you have brought out more light and the reflections from the original. I agree with Trey that having the flag pole centered and top/bottom weight is not optimal. If you try to crop this using the rule of thirds, it could be more impactful. |
Jun 5th |
| 76 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
I like how the plane itself turned out using your grunge technique. However, personally I think the clouds and sky would have appeared better if you masked out the grunge, and I believe it might have contributed to the banding. |
Jun 5th |
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