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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 27 |
Nov 22 |
Comment |
Good travel image of all the activity on the steps. i think the people are important to the story. The buildings are leaning in a little. |
Nov 30th |
| 27 |
Nov 22 |
Comment |
Beautiful soft image, great colours. Its good luck to get the boat to come by, but you were ready and it is a good sunset story. Nice composition. Sun and boat on the thirds. |
Nov 30th |
| 27 |
Nov 22 |
Comment |
I prefer the colours in the finished work. The original seems to have a green cast.
Good composition with no annoying bright sky over the top of the waterfall. An there is a flow of light ness coming down the waterfall that works well. |
Nov 30th |
| 27 |
Nov 22 |
Comment |
Its a great scene of the mill and the mono has helped capture the feeling of history. The edges of the river lead well into the chimney that rises up in to the sky.
To me, as the story is about the mill I would consider cropping at the left edge of the tree and removing some sky.
And then cropping some bottom to bring the leading lines up. |
Nov 30th |
| 27 |
Nov 22 |
Comment |
Lovely range of realistic autumn colours. The leading line of the branches really pulls my eye up to all the bunches of berries.
Softning or removing the highlights on the berries is worth a try. |
Nov 30th |
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