Activity for User 909 - Michael Jack - dmichael.jack@gmail.com

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36 Feb 24 Comment Well researched and well composed. On my monitor I do not see the noise Bill does. Artists' choice - if you wanted a star effect of the lights you could go to f22, but maybe you did not want that. For me, I would pull back the brightness and saturation of the bridge, but again that is a choice. To partially address Larry's concern, you could crop up a bit from the bottom. Feb 16th
36 Feb 24 Comment This certainly gives a sense of place and is well processed. The pano was a good choice. I agree with Larry that I would take the rock out of the left side. It appears to me that this could be two images - the one you have and one with only the town itself making up the image with similar roofs making the image more like a pattern Feb 16th
36 Feb 24 Comment For me the image works. The large structure on the right is balanced by the interest in the river. I am not sure you can crop the sky more because you would be truncating the structure to the right. To my eye (and style preference), the image looks a little flat to me. I would consider adding a bit more clarity or contrast. A polarizing filter may have reduced the glare in the river, but may not have helped the sky since you were at a wide angle. Feb 16th
36 Feb 24 Comment I love the composition and that you left it in color. My eyes can roam around in this image for a long time. I do agree with others that the exposure time was too long - for the water. It works for the rest of the image. For me, having some texture in the water would be helpful. Feb 16th
36 Feb 24 Comment I like the symmetrical composition and the overall exposure. I can tell it is late but can still see detail in the foreground. The building almost has an iridescent glow which seems to go with the brighter sky. I would consider bringing out the detail in the tower and making the sky warmer to match the building. Hopefully you are using PhotoPills to plan your moon shot Feb 16th
36 Feb 24 Comment As others said, fog is a great photo aid. To my eye, you made great use of the fog by allowing the bridge to disappear within it. I like the large negative space in the frame; it seems to add to the mystery and story. I could go with Larry's comment about flipping the image. Feb 16th
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