Activity for User 909 - Michael Jack - dmichael.jack@gmail.com

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36 Feb 18 Comment Ditto on the nice capture and processing. Great color. I agree with Bill's crop. I like the lower shutter speed giving a sense of flow to the lava. Did you take any shots at a faster shutter speed? Just wonder how those would compare. Feb 17th
36 Feb 18 Comment Excellent composition. I liked the leading line of the street, the added interest of person and bike, the color in the landscaping. and that you used the drain pipes to frame the image. A few considerations - you might use transform to straighten the perspective slightly; the image seems to lean very slightly left to me but that may change with a perspective change; I would lighten the center of the image along the street back to and including the person to draw the eye more there than to the bright sky; and finally, just a tweak, I would slightly darken the drain pipe on the left since the warm tone attracts the eye as is. Again, just suggestions.... Feb 17th
36 Feb 18 Comment I liked the leading lines of the clouds offsetting the lines of the mountains and the inclusion of a bit of foreground. To me, the house makes the shot unique - not just another (nice) coastal shot. The composition overall is very pleasing. A suggestion is to slightly brighten up and sharpen the house, not much, just to make it stand out a bit more. A question - it appears from a slight halo between the mountains and the sky that you may have pulled down the luminance of the sky in LR? Feb 17th
36 Feb 18 Comment I like the saturation and that you did not cut off the water from the fall until it exited the image - i.e., you can follow the flow all the way around the rocks. Good choice of shutter speed for the water, and you still got the leaves relatively sharp even though it was raining. Nicely done. My only suggestion is that the waterfall seems a bit tight on the left side, I might have given it a bit more breathing room. Feb 17th
36 Feb 18 Comment Rookie to group. I agree with other comments - leveling slightly, cropping up from the bottom, the warm color, etc. I see the vignette which overall is good. However, you might try subtly darkening the top of the white fog at the top of the picture - it seems to me to draw the eye out of the top of the picture. Feb 17th
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