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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 17 |
Jul 24 |
Comment |
Very interesting subject. I find my eye going to the large chaps (?) he is wearing - (they are brighter than the rest of cowboy and take a lot of space) - rather than his body and face. I would consider darkening them, and brightening his upper body to help him stand out from the tree. The crop is very tight, perhaps necessary to eliminate other distractions, but if not - adding more especially on the left would help to provide context. |
Jul 12th |
| 17 |
Jul 24 |
Comment |
I like the composition, the rising hill on the right helps frame the image. I'd consider making the sky more "ominous" perhaps using a clarity or other contrast adjustment on the sky only. Also increase the brightness in the foreground a little so more detail is visible. |
Jul 12th |
| 17 |
Jul 24 |
Comment |
There is a lot going on in this photo. My eye never really finds a place to settle. I would consider cropping the sky down to just above the clouds, but leave the building on the right in since it provides a frame for the beach scene. Lightening the three surfers so you can see detail in their clothes and faces would help make them the subject of the photo. |
Jul 12th |
| 17 |
Jul 24 |
Comment |
Well done! The only thing I would consider is cropping a little from the right, to my eye there is a little too much negative space. |
Jul 12th |
| 17 |
Jul 24 |
Comment |
I like the way the browns and greens compliment the color of the duck. I'd consider decreasing the brightness of the white tail feathers, they are blown out on my screen. |
Jul 12th |
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