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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 17 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
Great job isolating the antelope from the background with blur. I agree with Peter on brightening and rain spots. |
Jan 16th |
| 17 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
Its hard to suggest changes for this photo. You clearly captured the scene before you. The only edit I would consider is a small crop from right and left to keep more focus on the father and kids in the bike. Any changes other than that would require moving to a different vantage point, or zooming in on some of the other action but given need to stay clear of the police, that probably wasn't an option. |
Jan 16th |
| 17 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
I love the colors and the silhouettes. If I was putting the two images together, I would consider a few changes. The diagonal leading line of the birds takes my eye out of the image. Perhaps crop out the top three birds, and move the remaining birds a little lower and right to visually balance the building on the left. Let us know your decision on competing and how you did. |
Jan 16th |
| 17 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
Beautiful scene. I like the way you are framing the mountains with the branch above and foliage below. I agree with others about decreasing haze, increasing detail in the mountains. As a next step, you might consider cloning out the one bit of branch that hangs down into the sky on the right. Also, the framing at the bottom would be more effective if more of the folliage was included. |
Jan 16th |
| 17 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
Great composition, and great sky. For me, the sky and stones seem to be competing with each other for the role of image focal point. Perhaps selectively brightening the stones and increasing their contrast/texture would help them be more dominant. |
Jan 16th |
| 17 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
I like the layers of depth as the signs get smaller. I like the signs, for me they are the subject of the image. I'd consider brightening up the right side of the image to make the Pawn Broker sign more prominent. As presented, my eye wants to go to the brightest part of the image which is the two small signs on the left. Perhaps also increase contrast. My guess is the histogram is bunched in the middle. |
Jan 16th |
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