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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 17 |
Dec 21 |
Comment |
Love that steampunk! I think the b&w plus light vignette suit it well. I'm curious about the text over the doorway, "Free to All". Care to comment on its significance? |
Dec 11th |
| 17 |
Dec 21 |
Comment |
I like the diagonal lines of the railing and the breakwater extending out into the water. I think the image would benefit from more contrast in the bottom half, especially on the breakwater so that the individual stones were more distinct. I'd also consider doing a high contrast monochrome since the only significant color in the image is the water, and it isn't highly saturated. |
Dec 11th |
| 17 |
Dec 21 |
Comment |
I like the symmetry and repitition of bottles in the main display . I understand your desire to include the mirror reflections, but for me, they are distracting. Perhaps selectively blurring and/or darkening the background would help keep focus on the center display. Agree that vertical should be adjusted. |
Dec 11th |
| 17 |
Dec 21 |
Comment |
I agree with previous comments about liking the composition, but losing the lighthouse against the gray sky. I'm thinking the lighthouse should be the center of focus, but its small and tends to get lost in the picture. Perhaps a crop from the bottom and left side would make it more prominent. |
Dec 11th |
| 17 |
Dec 21 |
Comment |
I like the composition with the cove bracketed by the folliage at the bottom and the cliffs left and right. I find my eye being drawn to the cliffs on the left because they are so much brighter than anything else in the image, but I think your intent - based on composition - is for the cove to be the subject. Cropping from the left as Joe suggests and decreasing brightness of the cliffs while increasing brightness of the ocean and rocks in the ocean would make the cove be more prominent in the picture. |
Dec 10th |
| 17 |
Dec 21 |
Comment |
Is this a composite? When I saw the small image, I didn't pay much attention to the area above the dunes. I assumed that it was sky, but in the second image it clearly isn't. I like the graphic art feel of the dunes, but I think the area above with its detail clashes with it. I'd like the image better if it was replaced with something that matched the theme of the dunes. Perhaps even a solid shade of gray or a graduated brightness top to bottom gray. |
Dec 10th |
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