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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 17 |
Sep 21 |
Reply |
I'm not familiar with Data Software. I use now obsolete Spyder4 Pro, but I'm not up to speed on all the new models. |
Sep 12th |
| 17 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
I like the composition and the puffy clouds in the blue sky. On my screen, the area under the dock on the left and building on the right is blocked. The boats and building on the left are also very dark, and perhaps could benefit from a little increased brightness. |
Sep 11th |
| 17 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
The image is not sharp on my screen which makes it difficult to see that there are two overlapping sailboats. Even with the explanation, its hard to pick one out from the other. Is the color balance right - looks very blue on my screen. |
Sep 11th |
| 17 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Good pose and great colors - sweater and background appear to be the same color but different luminosity. I like the vignette keeping your attention on the model. I think there are things that people skilled at portrait editing could do to whiten eyes, smooth skin, etc. But that depends on what you want from the portrait. I don't know whether the photo is an accurate reflection of her skin texture, or whether the lighting magnifies the texture. |
Sep 11th |
| 17 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
I really like how the sun shines from between the building and the golden glow.The only edit that I think is required is fixing the building lean, but other than that what you do depends on what you like. You could adjust color, or increase the clarity of the buildings, or as Peter mentioned eliminate what is possibly lens flare - but I don't think even that is essential. |
Sep 11th |
| 17 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
I'm with Peter on this one. One difference is that I'd be a little more aggressive about the bright branch. I don't think cropping from the right up to the point that the horizontal brach goes behind the V clump of larger trees hurts the composition, and then I'd consider either further decreasing the brightness of the nub that extends out to the left, or perhaps cloning it out. |
Sep 10th |
| 17 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Interesting subject and good composition. If this was my photo, I'd consider adding more emphasis toe the owl and pussycar. Options include ccrop at the top eliminating the flag, and then using something like clone stamp to eliminate the post, decreasing brightness of the reflection in the lower right, and increasing brightness of the boat and figures. |
Sep 10th |
| 17 |
Sep 21 |
Reply |
Thanks Peter - I went back and played with contrast, and I do like it better with a little more contrast. Increased texture (Lightroom) but only in the top of the pixture. I wanted to keep some of the mysterious feel. Thanks for the suggestion |
Sep 8th |
6 comments - 2 replies for Group 17
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6 comments - 2 replies Total
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