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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 17 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
I like the composition and color contrast. I find the green background distracting, both its sharpness and brightness. Also wish that the window hadn't been clipped. I took a shot at editing in Photoshop - mostly to blur the background and darken but I also cropped just below the window - which cut the mirror in half. Since the mirror isn't very prominent, and didn't stand out from the darkened background, I just eliminated it. |
Jul 12th |
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| 17 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
Great photo with a few challenges - mostly the distractions in the background, both the band member and the wall hanging. I took a shot at editing - using photoshop. |
Jul 12th |
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| 17 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
The photo capabilities of the iphones have certainly increased. They work better as cameras than phones! I like the theme and composition, but agree with Joe regarding the large open sand area. I wonder if the contrast could be increased - it looks a little flat to me.
I think there is another interesting picture here if you have enough pixels - crop just under the rocks and from the right to just before the boat - dock provides a leading line and rocks and distant shore add depth. |
Jul 12th |
| 17 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
Echoing other's comments, it would help if the child stood out more prominently. I'm not sure how to do that - tried it unsuccessfuly in photoshop. Cropping from the top would also help make her more obvious. |
Jul 12th |
| 17 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
Depending on your taste/intent you could do any or a combination of these things:
1) increase contrast, my guess is that histogram is very concentrated at center
2) increase texture to bring out grain in wood
3) crop from the top to make the statue more prominent
4) adjust perspective to make the right wood board vertical
5) convert to monochrome
Or if you like it, you could just leave it as it is. |
Jul 12th |
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