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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 17 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
I think you want the central group of trees to be your subject, but the sharpness and brightness of the trees on the right draw my eye away from them. My crude attempt at editing is attached |
Jun 14th |
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| 17 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
The cottage and lighthouse are both interesting subjects, but are separated by too much negative space. Perhaps a "relocation" in post processing, or a different perspective as suggested by Joe would help. I'm having a problem with the lighting. The orientation of the strong shadows suggests a mid day photo but that isn't reflected in the brightness of the sky or sand. Perhaps the contrast could be increased. |
Jun 14th |
| 17 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
I like how the photo tells a story, and your editing is very effective. If I could make a change, it would be to reduce the saturation of the colors in the caricature a bit. I think that would help make it look less like it had been "photoshopped".
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Jun 14th |
| 17 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
So many stars. So few people get to see skies like that any more. I think the toning and composition take away from the night sky somewhat. I agree with Joe about cropping from the left to keep more focus on the sky. I would also decrease the brightness of the rocks, and perhaps darken the sky, but not the stars (decrease blue luminance perhaps). |
Jun 14th |
| 17 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
I think this image, accompanied with a caption explanation, would work very well as part of a news article about the narrow gauge railway.As a stand alone, I don't think it does as well. For a stand alone image, perhaps a close up showing more detail of the locomotive machinery, or the effort required to turn the wrench would be interesting. |
Jun 14th |
| 17 |
Jun 21 |
Reply |
Can't recall exactly, but it wasn't very long - one or two minutes at most. |
Jun 14th |
5 comments - 1 reply for Group 17
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5 comments - 1 reply Total
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