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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 17 |
Jan 21 |
Comment |
Beautiful. Composition, colors, etc. etc. I'd like to see a version where the brightness of the lighthouse is increased to more closely match the rocks below it. Not sure if that would be an improvement, but my eye keeps going back to the rocks and I think it should spend more time on the lighthouse. |
Jan 12th |
| 17 |
Jan 21 |
Comment |
I love the repeating pattern of sunflowers and how they recede into the distance. I agree with comments about cropping out the sky. The brightness of the sunflowers doesn't seem to match the brightness of the background and locks my eye on them. I'd consider increasing exposure beyond the sunflowers to increase the background's contribution to the image. |
Jan 12th |
| 17 |
Jan 21 |
Comment |
I like the sense of depth, but agree with Joe that the foreground focus is soft. I think that to "sell" your man vs nature theme, the pylon and wires need to stand out more. I'd also consider cropping from the bottom to remove most of the brown patch to bring more attention to the tops of the stalks. |
Jan 12th |
| 17 |
Jan 21 |
Comment |
I like the "framed" composition, and the red blue and green colors work well together. I would consider cropping about half the wall from the bottom of the window to the bottom of the image to make the outside scenery more prominent |
Jan 12th |
| 17 |
Jan 21 |
Comment |
I like the composition, and sense of depth. I think the mono version would benefit from increased contrast, and a little cropping from the right and top to move the horizon off centerline, and move the shed to a more prominent position. As Joe has commented, I like the color version better. Did you take any pictures at an angle to the shed, so that we would see more of it than the flat end? |
Jan 12th |
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