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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 70 |
Oct 19 |
Reply |
Thanks Todd. |
Oct 27th |
| 70 |
Oct 19 |
Reply |
Thanks for your comments and input. Indeed, I have removed all distracting elements as you and Judy suggested. This become one of my entry image for Open Color Category. Cross the fingers. |
Oct 20th |
| 70 |
Oct 19 |
Reply |
Thanks for you inputs. Indeed I have removed all distracting element near water and also crop the whole sky. |
Oct 20th |
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| 70 |
Oct 19 |
Reply |
Thanks Lamar. |
Oct 20th |
| 70 |
Oct 19 |
Reply |
Thanks Pierre. |
Oct 20th |
| 70 |
Oct 19 |
Comment |
Hi Judy, It's awesome, awesome and awesome. It's almost perfect set to me. My only suggestion is to rotate the whole image clockwise the get horizontal horizon. |
Oct 20th |
| 70 |
Oct 19 |
Comment |
Hi Glen.
I like the impact of this image; symmetrical reflection of the building; the right time of shooting for Color Harmony between building, sand and sky; and ... how you arranged the horizon in the middle of the frame for a balance composition.
I know how you and all of us regret missing part of the building cut off. That's one of my reasons not only bracketed the exposures but I also took several frames in case that I need part of the image. I always think this could be once a life time chance.
Lately, I learned how powerful is the Clone Stamp Tool in Photoshop. Adobe include 'Clone Source Panel' to allow flip horizontal, flip vertical and adjust the angle of the souce and the copy of the image.
Warm regards from Indonesia!
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Oct 20th |
| 70 |
Oct 19 |
Comment |
Hi Todd, I really appreciate your tremendous effort to get this image. I like the composition. I have done Milky Way myself and get frustrated for not getting any decent results.
I agree with Pierre the overall image seems too sharp. I believe this image has strong elements for upgrading to the next level for a more stunning Milky Way.
Please review "Alone" by Alessandro Cantarelli. https://capturetheatlas.com/best-milky-way-images/.
I believe this was a composite image. I like how Allesandro create local unsharpeness, blur effects and partial brightness to create interest areas and dimensional depth. He then added two fixation points, the man on top of the hill and litted green bush. Have fun experimenting yourself Todd!
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Oct 20th |
| 70 |
Oct 19 |
Comment |
My review this time is based on your original image, the B&W version in response to Judy's comments and the panoramic color version in response to Glen's comments. You make me learn how as a photographer we need to listen to our viewer voice. We want people enjoy seeing our image. It's a sharing photographic ego to our viewers. To me, the color panoramic is the one that I like the most. Essentially, it's the same image. You have just demonstrated how framing and cropping can substatially make a difference. Thanks for your lesson this time Pierre! |
Oct 20th |
| 70 |
Oct 19 |
Comment |
My first impression when viewing this image is the shinning part of the silver objects. It make stop and ponder what are those? To me, that's your success to create impact to these image. I amazed your creativity when you said you are waiting for light. This was an effective use of light to explore object dimension. The shadows of the tree is adding story to this image. Your time to wait for the light is well worthed. The white door behind keep pulling my attention to enjoy this image. My suggestion would be darkening this part to make it less obvious. Job well done Lamar! |
Oct 20th |
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