Activity for User 901 - Frans Gunterus - fransgunterus.psa@gmail.com

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70 Mar 19 Reply Thanks Todd. Mar 13th
70 Mar 19 Comment Hi Judy,

My primary interest area is the flying birds following a curvy line. I appreciate your creativity by positioning the line almost right in the middle of the frame. It makes the birds almost like flying from behind the bush. Another point that I like is you almost divide the background into half bush and half calm sea. To me, it's really a perfect composition.

I also like how you set color harmony. Combination between colorful chairs and blue hour sky.

My only suggestion here is to make the cloud less saturate and thinning it to make it less obvious. Wonderful work Judy!
Mar 13th
70 Mar 19 Comment I really appreciate your photographic eyes to spot this unique tree branches. To me, the palmettos does not add any value to the whole image. I agree with you, this image might look better in B&W and why don't try to make it pictorial. Have fun Kathy. Mar 13th
70 Mar 19 Comment Glen, I like your creativity to frame this scene with low angle shot. I agree with Pierre to exclude distracting fall at the top. My only suggestion is to darken the surrounding area to expose smoothness of the fall. Nice work! Mar 13th
70 Mar 19 Comment Hi Todd,

I think you chose the right time and the right angle to capture this image. I like how you maintain sharpness of clouds around the sun. The sun and it's ray of lights definitely brings significant impact to me. This was my primary interest area.

I like how you set diagonal composition by postioning the sun off center on the upper right corner then include foreground on the lower left corner. I also love the image color harmony.

I suggest you create secondary interest areas to bring more impacts to this image. Impact is when the viewer is amazed, stop and continue to ponder. Interest areas serve to keep the viewer's mind from wandering around and create pleasant fixation points. I suggest you darkened most part of your fore ground. It's too brght and too crispy, to me. I suggest you just brightened and sharpened partial spots of the foreground to make your viewer curious and wondering around this area. Be mind full to maintain brightness and sharpness of the lower left corner of the foreground for diagonal composition.

I appreciate how you spend tremendous time and effort to create this image.
Mar 12th
70 Mar 19 Comment Hi Pierre,

First, I love how you choose color harmony. A combination between blue sky and warm sun rise. The composition is just right, to me. I like how you combine between diagonal and horizontal line into the frame. I also like how you include square block stone at the lower left corner. It's a strong fixation point, to me.

For improvement, I suggest you remove distracting clouds for clean and clear blue hour sky. I also suggest you partially sharpening (just) edges of the foreground stones to create more sense of depth to the image. Nice work Glen.
Mar 12th
70 Mar 19 Reply Hi Katheryn. Thanks for your comments. You right. I have tremendously reduced the window mid tones to get more crisp stained glass. And, you spotted it. I should have used it moderately to make it more realistic. Thanks Kathy! Mar 12th
70 Mar 19 Reply Hi Lamar, thanks for a good question on how I handled the moving persons. I am indeed very particular about how to include this moving element into my image. I purposely turned off the automatic ghosting in HDR. Choose the moving object from one particular frame of my shot and masking it in Photoshop. I purposely darkened back of the moving persons.
Mar 12th
70 Mar 19 Comment Hi Lamar,

I was amazed by bright opening sky and its ray of lights. To me, this was a perfect lighting for capturing the image. This was a clear impact of the image, to me. Because, from there, my eyes started to ponder another interest areas.

My eyes stopped at the Light House. This was a clear fixation point, to me.

Another thing that I like is how you applied the Rule of Third. Keeping more space for the sky and place your horizon one third from bottom. It's an awesome approach, to me.

I suggest you brightened the surrounding area of the light house to make it more appealing fixation point. Highlight some areas of the land, and you might want to create some bright white dots on some part of the land to make it more alive - rather than dark flat piece of land.

Mar 5th
70 Mar 19 Comment Hi Glen.

You have perfectly demonstrated how to use 'personal voice' of Image Analyses (IA). A complete review of most IA elements: Impact, Technique, Technical Excellence, Composition, Interest Area, The Story, Color Harmony.

I am expecting if you have a suggestion for short fix of any flaws.Thanks for excellent review Glen.

Mar 4th
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