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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 17 |
Jun 23 |
Reply |
I could have added a bit more on the right, but the original did not have shore on the right side.
I agree that the image would be better if the shore was visible on the right. |
Jun 6th |
| 17 |
Jun 23 |
Comment |
Well shot! He looks like he about to jump right out of the picture. You did a great job focusing on the eyes and capturing the light in his eyes.
You might consider removing the leaf near the bottom center of the image. It kind of pulls the eye to the bottom of the image. |
Jun 5th |
| 17 |
Jun 23 |
Comment |
Ha, ha, ha....I love the red shoes. I'm glad that you did not crop them out. You might consider cropping a hair more on the right to eliminate the white marking on the black rail. They kinda draw my eye.
To me, it seems like the image is sharper at the bottom than it is on his face. You might want to try using one or some of the Topaz plugins to add sharpness where needed. |
Jun 2nd |
| 17 |
Jun 23 |
Comment |
I love the concept that you are trying to create here. Because your intent was to portray the Navajo Spirit, you might want to consider cropping the hole out or the upper portion of the image. It draws the eye away from the spirit image. |
Jun 2nd |
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| 17 |
Jun 23 |
Comment |
What did you do in post processing?
I think you did a great job arranging the fruit and the stray leaves. However, to me it feels like everything is suspendended it space. I would like to see a hint of the table that your arrangement is sitting on to give some context to the image.
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Jun 2nd |
| 17 |
Jun 23 |
Comment |
The steam clouds add significantly to this image. Color toning and exposure seem to be right on, although you didn't give any information about exposure or post processing.
To my eye, the crop is just a bit too tight. I would like to see a bit more room above the bridge, to the right in the direction the train is travelling, and a bit below the train. |
Jun 2nd |
5 comments - 1 reply for Group 17
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5 comments - 1 reply Total
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