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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 39 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
Good composition (of shadow of the temple ) and good idea to go in B&W, which is much better.
Is was necessary to ait until the man is outside the shadow.
I would try to "better" highlight the "manna" of vegetables. I didn't immediately see it. |
Sep 23rd |
| 39 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
I appreciate the angle. For the sky, it could have interesting to have it completely dark, or to go more to the "High key" as it is. But, in this case, the objects on the right is quite disturbing, for me.
Good job to have removed the doormat. |
Sep 23rd |
| 39 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
I can imaging that a lot of people would/could say, very beautiful image and woman.
I agree with them, but I have some comments.
Her eyes are very beautiful. I like the position of the hair and the earring on her right, well done. The skin is (almost) perfect.
Her mouth is beautiful, with beautiful lines and shapes, but I don't like it. I find it is "too much" (too perfect maybe) and it is in opposition with the eyes.
Very strict look. Maybe too much to really appreciate the image.
This is my opinion. |
Sep 14th |
| 39 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
I can imaging that a lot of people would/could say, very beautiful image and woman.
I agree with them, but I have some comments.
Her eyes are very beautiful. I like the position of the hair and the earring on her right, well done. The skin is (almost) perfect.
Her mouth is beautiful, with beautiful lines and shapes, but I don't like it. I find it is "too much" (too perfect maybe) and it is in opposition with the eyes.
Very strict look. Maybe too much to really appreciate the image.
This is my opinion. |
Sep 14th |
| 39 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
Difficult to add something after all these comments, I will just give my opinion ont his image.
I don't take IR image, but I like to see one (or more) from time to time, as the effect is special and original, as it is here.
I really like the composition (lines of the river) of the image, and the black of the sky. Well done.
I appreciate less the grass and the trees. |
Sep 14th |
| 39 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
I also prefer the B&W version. As already mentioned, the stem and the dark bottom right corner are disturbing.
At first sight, I found the symmetry well done, and I like it. However I was immediately attracted and disturbed by the halo around the mirrors, especially from the one on the right.
The clouds have lines until the car, they guide us, and I appreciate it. |
Sep 14th |
| 39 |
Sep 20 |
Reply |
Thanks Larry for your version.
I was at 2,8 and the background is still present...
The crop is indeed necessary. |
Sep 7th |
| 39 |
Sep 20 |
Reply |
Dera Stephan,
Thanks a lot for your relevant analysis. I fully agree with you and the other comments. I was happy for this first shooting, but I see there is still a lot to do (for the pictures). I think the dancers also agree with us. |
Sep 7th |
6 comments - 2 replies for Group 39
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6 comments - 2 replies Total
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