Activity for User 889 - Paul Swepston - paulswepston@me.com

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13 Apr 23 Comment great idea and great composition. The composition showing the front, back and two sides gives it a sort of Picasso-like cubist feel. Apr 23rd
13 Apr 23 Comment I really like this somewhat haunting image because it generates more questions than answers. I'm not sure why the original image doesn't show the rusty vertical metal on the right but the final version does. I would probably remove the rusty vertical metal as I don't think it adds to the story. Apr 23rd
13 Apr 23 Comment Lots of good vertical and horizontal lines and even a vertical line. It was a very good choice to convert to monochrome as it helps make the subject pop out against the various backgrounds. Apr 23rd
13 Apr 23 Comment It is good to know they still build buildings where you can open a window. Great composition with diagonal lines and vertical lines broken by the one window. Apr 23rd
13 Apr 23 Comment Great story and I love the arrangement of nets and riggings over the outer windows. Apr 23rd
13 Apr 23 Comment What I like about it is that it is the reverse side of what you would see looking out one of those windows which means that the tree provides a good deal of privacy. My only technical suggestion would be to use the transform in Photoshop to pull the top right corner a little more to the right so the perspective would be as used straight on from the middle. Apr 23rd
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