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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 50 |
Sep 18 |
Comment |
Well composed and good tonal range--the clouds are not blown out. Might add a gradient filter from the top and darken a little. |
Sep 2nd |
| 50 |
Sep 18 |
Comment |
Either BW or color works for me as the colors are quite pleasing. You capture the motion really well. Good job. |
Sep 2nd |
| 50 |
Sep 18 |
Comment |
I think BW is a reasonable choice here. I would like to have seen more of the race track for context: the row of tires doesn't do much for me as the base of the photo. Might push the contrast and the white a little. |
Sep 2nd |
| 50 |
Sep 18 |
Comment |
I actually like the color as the red adds drama to an expressive face. That said, the BW is totally fine here. I like what you did in removing background elements. I might increase the darkness of the gradient on the right side. Is this posed; if not what is she looking at? |
Sep 2nd |
| 50 |
Sep 18 |
Comment |
This is a powerful image that would be more powerful with increased tonality (I see little true black). I might also add a gradient filter from the top and dehire some to add drama. Suggest also removing the tall structure behind the right trees. |
Sep 2nd |
| 50 |
Sep 18 |
Comment |
It's a fun shot for sure and the shadow helps the composition. Overall I'm not drawn to the image too much due principally to its flatness or lack of tonal range. I might darken the dirt grass on the right to get the viewer to focus on the saw OR perhaps crop so that only the blade and tree trunk are visible. All that said, I am not more drawn to the color version. |
Sep 2nd |
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