Activity for User 871 - Donna Sturla - dsturla@hotmail.com

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10 Jun 18 Comment Thank you, everyone. Your constructive criticism is much appreciated ! Jun 27th
10 Jun 18 Comment Thank you, David. The trees are not in focus. Maybe I should have put them less in focus? Jun 25th
10 Jun 18 Reply Thanks ! I saw your picture from the LBGTQ and really liked it. The reflection in the sunglasses was great, but there were so many comments I didn't think you needed another !
But a very nice image. 		Jun 16th
10 Jun 18 Reply Thank you, Oliver, I like how you cropped it.
I have a tendency to want everything in the picture, and am getting better at cropping, so I appreciate the feedback !
Donna		 Jun 16th
10 Jun 18 Comment I like the storytelling also, but there is so much in this picture ! I would have focused in a lot more on the lady with the white hat and pink shirt, keep the umbrella in the picture, and put her at the left third area of the image.
Cropping it down would make it easier to take in and still tell a great story. Also I do think it's overexposed and the colors look a little off, maybe for the same reason - the exposure. 		Jun 10th
10 Jun 18 Comment Ditto what John said. I might crop a little off the left side, I don't think all that blank space adds much to the picture. I wonder how it would have looked as a vertical?
But it's a great perspective, good focus .Nice !!		 Jun 10th
10 Jun 18 Comment I like the image, too, but would probably have saturated it a bit and I'd like to see more of the water in front of the picture. But it's probably one of those times when you only had a few moments to shoot, and that's what you got, so you did the best you could. Jun 10th
10 Jun 18 Comment Yes, I keep looking at the bushes over on the right because they are brighter than everything else. I'd either crop them or put on a layer mask and darken them. Lovely image !! Jun 10th
10 Jun 18 Comment In Regards to Richard's comment, one thing I notice for myself is that if I find the person in the image really unattractive (even a paid model) I have to separate my dislike of the subject and look at the image as a whole and ask if it is well lighted, if it's interesting, is it well composed, exposed, etc. So Richard might want to look at this from that perspective.
I like this picture because I LOVE texture and this picture has texture everywhere. It's well exposed, interesting, and draws me in. I like it a lot !		 Jun 10th
10 Jun 18 Comment OK, I'll try your suggestions. Thank you ! Jun 10th
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