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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 2 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
Amazing and stunning peace of work especially considering the original and your conversion to a minimalistic peace of art. I think the wire removal just adds to the minimalism slightly, but having the wires portrays him as being connected to the rest of the world in some way. The signage should be left as wabi sabi to maintain character but the lower sign could do with more contrast. |
Nov 11th |
| 2 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
That's a very well posed portrait with grace and style. I agree the background helps the traditional theme but at the risk of visually competing with the girl. The three lines of the table, instrument and frame are quite strong, again competing but possibly adding to an intriguing story. |
Nov 11th |
| 2 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
I have looked at the original and think it should be the submission for discussion. The blend of colors are fascinating and give an antique impression, and there is a nice curve from flowers to petals leading the eye across the shiny table. However, I think it might be better to have slight image separation between the vase and the shoes.
Sorry to hear about the virus onslaught and hope you have come out on top. |
Nov 11th |
| 2 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
I note with interest the in focus water drop and front petal and how you have managed the tricky background, which now compliments the orange tulip. I would tend to darken the background but that's probably habitual in my case. |
Nov 11th |
| 2 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
Thanks for a very interesting image and lesson in HDR. At first impression I was struck by the wabi sabi appearance of the boats and the interesting names, and somehow Martin has brought this out better, although at the expense of the foreground water strip. It's a very orange sky and wonder if it should get a touch of red perhaps. |
Nov 11th |
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