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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 54 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Thank you for your kind words Betty. I am pleased you enjoyed it. |
Aug 14th |
| 54 |
Aug 17 |
Reply |
Thank you for the wonderful words. I hadn't thought of the angle of the flower being sinister. Himalayan poppies tend to bow their heads. This might be a place where flipping the original so the diagonal is going up instead of down might make a positive impact. Certainly brightening the background would help. |
Aug 12th |
| 54 |
Aug 17 |
Reply |
Thanks, Aavo. I hadn't thought of the piece as being surreal. |
Aug 7th |
| 54 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
This is a fun concept. I've only been to Park City in the winter, and I don't think this is a game that is played in December. I think I agree with Phillipa that you could get rid of the flags, but they also tell a story about your ladies being out of bounds. I feel the thing that needs work is the lighting on the various models. They need to have the same color balance. You might try a color look-up table on top of the stack to see if that would pull the colors together. Also, it looks like the model sitting on the grass has been run through a painting program, and if so, you might try running the entire image through something like Topaz Impression or try the filter gallery in Photoshop. Perhaps something like this. |
Aug 6th |
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| 54 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Wow, what a great job of blending the images together. I agree with Peggy's comments, but I think you could use one bird vs. two. Overall it feels like a single composition. The grey misty background is a nice touch.
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Aug 5th |
| 54 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Congratulations on being a great grandmother to be. I love the capture of a wonderfully happy granddaughter. The pose with the fabric blowing in the wind is beautiful. I really like the texture in the sky, but I agree with Peggy about the watercolor drips. Perhaps dropping the opacity a bit on them would make them less distracting. Overall a beautiful image. |
Aug 5th |
| 54 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
It looks like you had fun making the image. Obviously your model was having a great time. I like how you came up with the background. I think I agree with your comment about making the fighters look a bit "cut out", but I like the feel of what you did. The one area I might have spent a bit more time on was the flames on the right. They get cut off with a sharp edge. A fun image all around. |
Aug 5th |
5 comments - 2 replies for Group 54
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5 comments - 2 replies Total
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