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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 16 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Now that I see the image as displayed, I totally agree with the need to eliminate the strip of the building on the far left. Thanks! |
May 27th |
| 16 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Yes, it is the reflection seen in the mirrored windows of the building on the right however the angles within that building allow many additional shapes of the buildings to appear at different places. |
May 27th |
| 16 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Joan, I do think your changes in the image you submitted based on Mohanan's suggestion is stronger. In this 2nd composition attempt, my eye easily moves throughout the image delighting in the colors and shapes. |
May 27th |
| 16 |
May 25 |
Comment |
This is a beautiful image. The composition is strong. It is amazing what we can do with cell phone images. I think I prefer the coloring and softness of the original image. It has a magical and mystical feel to it in my opinion. |
May 27th |
| 16 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Thank you Charles. I thinking cropping the left side out would definitely help. I will also attempt to work on right thick black line. Not sure exactly what will work but do agree that some change needs to be made. |
May 21st |
| 16 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Charles, although your image is technically well done (sharp, captures the entire setting, framing image with leaves on the right), I am wondering if it is not too busy. as a viewer, I don't know where to rest my eyes. I really think that you have several wonderful images within this image. This is my attempt to capture one of them. Do you think you might consider trying some? |
May 19th |
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3 comments - 3 replies for Group 16
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3 comments - 3 replies Total
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