Activity for User 827 - Terry Campanella - shorty4062@aol.com

avatar
Avatar

Close this Tab when done

551 Comments / 134 Replies Posted

  = Current Round   = Previous Round
Group Round C/R Comment Date Image
16 Feb 23 Comment Bogdan, what a beautiful image! The grace of the cherry trees tells this story. I do love the softness of the blue sky in the original. I am wondering if you might consider making this image more of a panoramic view really highlighting the color and shape of the trees. Feb 17th
16 Feb 23 Reply Yes, Joan definitely shot too slow. I was focusing on foliage in the area when he unexpectedly decided to land. Feb 17th
16 Feb 23 Comment Joan, great pose! I think this image has a lot going for it. It is sharp, interesting, and you have managed to get good details on most of the feathers. I do agree that the background is distracting. You may want to consider burring it more or breaking up the branches that seem to go into the bird by cloning some leafy background into some spots. I also feel like, although the wood he is standing on has interesting texture, it could be darkened a bit. Feb 9th
16 Feb 23 Comment Renee, what an interesting activity for those of you who are enjoying winter weather! It is clear and sharp. I think you are absolutely correct about the ice spray setting this image apart. Since the background, although somewhat blurred, still competes for where our eye is drawn, I would like to suggest two possible solutions. Selective color and additional burring. You may also want to consider a slightly different crop which allows us to focus more an our sculpture and the intensity of his task. Feb 8th
16 Feb 23 Comment Water, I think you found a very worthy subject to photograph! The flower is crisp, clean and has lots of character. I am thinking that you may want to consider a different crop that which will allow the leaves to add to the composition. I also would also suggest adding contrast. Please excuse my poor example but I hope it will give you some idea of how it might look. Feb 8th
16 Feb 23 Comment Mohanan, the expression on the child's face speaks complete and total trust. The expression in the grandmother's face speaks of weariness and concern. Together they tell a beautiful story. I think the black and white is perfect for this image. My only suggestion would be to lighten the grandmother's face just a bit (especially needed on the right). I do think that your original shows exactly the amount on lightening needed. Feb 3rd
5 comments - 1 reply for Group 16
5 comments - 1 reply Total

101 Images Posted

  = Current Round   = Previous Round
Group 14

Jul 18
Jun 18
May 18
Apr 18
Mar 18
Feb 18
Jan 18
Dec 17
Nov 17
Sep 17
Aug 17
Group 16

Apr 26
Mar 26
Feb 26
Jan 26
Dec 25
Nov 25
Oct 25
Sep 25
Aug 25
Jul 25
Jun 25
May 25

Apr 25
Mar 25
Feb 25
Jan 25
Nov 24
Oct 24
Sep 24
Aug 24
Jul 24
Jun 24
May 24
Apr 24

Mar 24
Feb 24
Jan 24
Dec 23
Nov 23
Sep 23
Aug 23
Jul 23
Jun 23
May 23
Apr 23
Mar 23

Feb 23
Jan 23
Dec 22
Nov 22
Oct 22
Sep 22
Aug 22
Jul 22
Jun 22
May 22
Apr 22
Mar 22

Feb 22
Jan 22
Dec 21
Nov 21
Oct 21
Sep 21
Aug 21
Jul 21
Jun 21
May 21
Apr 21
Mar 21

Feb 21
Jan 21
Dec 20
Nov 20
Oct 20
Sep 20
Aug 20
Jul 20
Jun 20
May 20
Apr 20
Mar 20

Feb 20
Jan 20
Dec 19
Nov 19
Oct 19
Sep 19
Aug 19
Jul 19
Jun 19
May 19
Apr 19
Mar 19

Feb 19
Jan 19
Dec 18
Nov 18
Oct 18
Group 37

Jul 17

Close this Tab when done