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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 16 |
Aug 21 |
Comment |
Joan, what a tender moment between these two females. I am wondering if they are actually related to one another. I think your colors are spot on but would like to suggest even a tighter crop to give us even a greater sense of the story. |
Aug 29th |
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| 16 |
Aug 21 |
Comment |
Great shot! Looks like a very exciting event. Your colors are rich and capture the beauty of the day as well as the intensity of the riders. I do think the original landscape image gave me a much better sense of the action and what was taking place. |
Aug 29th |
| 16 |
Aug 21 |
Comment |
Kathleen, what a WONDERFUL image! The quality, colors and sharpness are all outstanding. I've also been working to improve my iPhone skills and hope to submit an image next month. It is amazing to learn all of the tools now available to work on images. The only suggestion I would have for your image is to pull back the amount of blue in the train itself. |
Aug 28th |
| 16 |
Aug 21 |
Comment |
Bud, great capture! It sounds like your editing really made this a strong image. I am wondering if you might consider changing the crop a bit and adding a vignette. |
Aug 14th |
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| 16 |
Aug 21 |
Comment |
Water, this is a great image! I can't believe how much detail you were able to capture. Your settings seem to be spot on. Increasing the canvas really added to the composition. I am wondering if a different crop and adding even more canvas would be even more pleasing from a composition point of view. |
Aug 14th |
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| 16 |
Aug 21 |
Reply |
Thanks Kathleen. I agree, the color version is does make the color pop more.
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Aug 14th |
| 16 |
Aug 21 |
Comment |
This image is definitely telling us a story. I think that including the road in front of them gives us a sense that this is a long and arduous journey. The increase saturation really brings out their clothing and the landscape. I would remove the larger pieces of trash from the ground on the right which are a distraction that takes away from story of the day-to-day life of these people. Wonderful image! |
Aug 7th |
| 16 |
Aug 21 |
Reply |
Thanks Bud!
I do agree that I've overdone the vignette. Will definitely pull it back a bit before printing this image. |
Aug 7th |
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6 comments - 2 replies Total
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