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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 14 |
May 18 |
Comment |
Arun, I like to composition but feel like if the main focal point is the fence and the broad walk then I would like to see more color and texture in them and less saturation in the sky and water. I think this image has great possibilities. Thanks for sharing it with us. |
May 20th |
| 14 |
May 18 |
Comment |
Great image. Great lesson Larry. Thanks for sharing it with us! |
May 20th |
| 14 |
May 18 |
Comment |
Clarissa, what a wonderful capture of a story! I like the idea that you blurred and desaturated the background. I think it helps peek my interest the story about where she is and what she might be feeling. The only suggestion I would have would be to tone down the road and a couple of the extra bright spots in the background. GREAT street photography. You could never stage an image like this. |
May 20th |
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| 14 |
May 18 |
Comment |
I think both the reflection and the white foam add to this image. I can not believe the clarity you achieved in both the birds and the bubbles in the foam. I wonder if you considered making this more of an oblong shape. I think it gives more of a sense of movement along this shore line. |
May 20th |
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| 14 |
May 18 |
Comment |
Evan,
I love the look and feel of this image. For me, the story it about this amazing little home that allows those who reside there the joy of seeing this beautiful mountain every day. The color, and softness only adds to the mood of the image. My only suggestion would be a slight cropping of a bit of the sky so that the image is more distinct in it use of the rule of thirds. |
May 20th |
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| 14 |
May 18 |
Comment |
Thanks for the suggestions! |
May 20th |
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