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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 58 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
The expression of the girl is making this photo. it gives the feeling that there is conversation between her and the dog. There is a light behind the glass inside the store makes some distraction.
I liked the idea of showing the midbody of the man and woamn there. it gives a sense of curiosity about them. |
Nov 13th |
| 58 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Nice Portrait and good reflection for the day of dead. I agree with Isaac suggestion, in addition, I suggest that the eyes of her to be in one spot of the rule of thirds, and to make the corners darker to direct to eyes more to the center and her eyes.
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Nov 13th |
| 58 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Jim, the capture is really interesting and beautiful. I liked it very much in black and white. As the train is old, it is more compatible to convert it to bnw. But that does not mean that the color is not nice as well. I think you need to make a little treatment for the clouds as they are taking the eyes more than the subject. try to re-edit the bnw considering the idea of making the subject which is the man to be more focused and our eyes go directly to him.
Very nice work Jim |
Nov 13th |
| 58 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Interesting as always.
The framing and colors are attractive and eye-catching, and woman presence created a nice story there.
The only comment is the blurry corners.
Nice work. |
Nov 13th |
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