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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 17 |
Dec 17 |
Comment |
Very well captured. Yes, the missing wing tip is a minus but a small one. If you were entering it in competitions judges would mark it down for that. Maybe you have another shot with a wing tip you could copy in and extend the canvas to provide enough distance at the top. Of course then you wouldn't be able to enter this in a wildlife section but it could go in other sections. |
Dec 11th |
| 17 |
Dec 17 |
Comment |
Nice shot. Dick is right about removing the bright reed as this improves the image. The only other detraction is the bird's second leg is missing the foot but then it does have to stand up on something! I guess what I'm saying is that if you have cropped this at the base then maybe there are some reeds there which provide a more natural base for that leg. At the moment it's just cut off. Mind you, I am not a nature photographer either so I would have been pretty pleased to get this. |
Dec 11th |
| 17 |
Dec 17 |
Comment |
A well taken shot and good choice of clouds to inlay. The lighting is attractive. The boulder on the left is very useful to lead the eye up to the door of the church. The only other point is about the vertical for the church tower which is probably like it is as you are looking uphill at it but the more I notice it the more it detracts from the whole image. I tried straightening it with the RAW filter correction tool and this is the result. You lose some of the grass but come closer to the boulder. Don't know if this helps but I thought I'd give it a go. |
Dec 11th |
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| 17 |
Dec 17 |
Comment |
I like this for its colour, definition and capture of speed. You can also see the pilots faces so I wonder how far away you were for this. The plug ins have worked well. My only criticism would be the amount of space there is behind the aircraft. There is a lot of 'dead space' there and it's always better in my opinion to have more in front of a moving object. You might try increasing the canvas space on the left and filling with content aware or more drastically play around with moving the aircraft back a little and adjusting accordingly. Or - leave well alone! |
Dec 11th |
| 17 |
Dec 17 |
Comment |
I have to agree with comments already posted but I can see why you took this as the texture and shapes are interesting. I sometimes take images like this when I visit a beach and rock formations are fascinating. At the back of my mind I think maybe I will be able to use this as a texture behind or for another image so don't ditch it!
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Dec 11th |
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