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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 41 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
Hi Nadia,
I don't have much to add here. It is a fine composite. Thinking about Robin's comments, I'd have to agree. It does feel clinical. Givin that the street lights are the only source of light, one suggestion would be to darken the entire image and make the light clearly from the street lights which would give it some moodiness. I think the text "time lost" could be replaced by images of what they could be doing instead, which would make it less literal and more analog so to speak. |
Jan 20th |
| 41 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
Nice work. I like the realistic shadows you added. |
Jan 20th |
| 41 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
Hi Hazel,
Interesting colors and shapes. Nice abstract. |
Jan 20th |
| 41 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
Hi Brad,
I don't care for the Topaz treatment, but that's me in general. I don't understand the symbolism to the church in the tree image. I would think that the tree and the deer are connected by nature, so maybe a branch touching the nose of the deer would be more meaningful? I think you have some nice elements here to make something interesting. |
Jan 20th |
| 41 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
Hi Robin,
I really like the first version for all the reasons stated above. |
Jan 20th |
| 41 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
Thanks Ian and Brad for the suggestion on the crop. I used a custom brush to add the sunlight on a separate layer. |
Jan 12th |
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