Activity for User 808 - Jim Hagan - jimahagan@bex.net

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1013 Comments / 279 Replies Posted

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Group	Round	C/R	Comment	Date	Image
11	Dec 23	Reply	Henry, many thanks for your suggestion. I really like cropping out the patterned sidewalk as I now see it as a distraction. In my revision I also cropped off a little from the right side (as suggested) and also brightened the image slightly.	Dec 19th
11	Dec 23	Comment	I really like the mono version. I feel the composition captures a feeling of loneliness or perhaps isolation of the early settlers in the vast area. No suggestions	Dec 11th
11	Dec 23	Comment	Excellent. Great image. Great composition. I like the way you toned down the hot spots which were in the original and softened the shoulder area. I have no suggestions.	Dec 11th
11	Dec 23	Comment	Very nice image. Nice conversion from color. Nice composition. I have no suggestions.	Dec 11th
11	Dec 23	Reply	Sorry for my mistake. I now have them in their correct position. Jim Hagan	Dec 11th
11	Dec 23	Comment	A great image. We usually look down from the top of a staircase but your perspective is much more than interesting. It is unusual and great. I have no suggestions.	Dec 11th
11	Dec 23	Comment	I like your image a lot. The clouds by themself would be okay but adding the fence adds much to the image. And, I especially like your leaving the end of the fence open. Your conversion from the color image is great as is the composition. I have no suggestions.	Dec 11th
5 comments - 2 replies for Group 11
18	Dec 23	Comment	The original image is quiet, somber and peaceful. The revision is much more dramatic but perhaps too vibrant especially the very bright yellow areas. Let me suggest a less dramatic image in which I used the arch of the fallen tree to frame the open area of the image.	Dec 12th
18	Dec 23	Comment	The original image is okay, interesting but not outstanding. The revision is much more interesting and dramatic. I have no suggestions.	Dec 12th
18	Dec 23	Comment	I like the image. The composition is great. Each rider is identifiable. There is a feeling of motion. But my preference would be for somewhat less abstraction.	Dec 12th
18	Dec 23	Comment	Amazing how a few colorful items can be used to create such an interesting image. I like the way the diagonals lead your eye into the circle of swirling colors. I have no suggestions.	Dec 12th
4 comments - 0 replies for Group 18
78	Dec 23	Reply	I also like Sunil's revision as it changes the image from being an abstract to a nature image with a great composition.	Dec 19th
78	Dec 23	Reply	Thanks for your suggestion and image. Your crop does focus your attention on the road and less on the bridge.	Dec 19th
78	Dec 23	Comment	I like your image. It is very interesting. You eye keeps moving around looking at the bubbles and the green areas. I have no suggestions.	Dec 11th
78	Dec 23	Reply	I want to add that my comment about the right leg is perhaps overly critical.	Dec 11th
78	Dec 23	Comment	I like you image a lot, so much better than the original. I like the way you straightened the lines and your elimination of the building. And, the placement of Moses makes the composition just great. No suggestions.	Dec 11th
78	Dec 23	Comment	I don't know what to say. The image has great color, great composition and great conversion from the original. But, the image suffers greatly from the right leg being partly hidden by a leaf.	Dec 11th
78	Dec 23	Comment	James, I like your image and your composition. In my revision I brightened the subject, sharpened a little bit more, darkened the background and (as was suggested) darkened the 3 dots in the eye. I see no reason why the image cannot be entered in the Nature category.	Dec 11th
78	Dec 23	Comment	Ed, I like the subject and your composition. I also agree that in a mono version more contrast is needed. But, I prefer the color version. So in my possible revision I darkened the sky, adjusted some of the verticals, lightened the dark shed areas and increased vibrancy.	Dec 11th
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