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Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
11 |
Sep 23 |
Reply |
Thanks. |
Sep 29th |
11 |
Sep 23 |
Reply |
Thank you. I agree it looks much better. |
Sep 24th |
11 |
Sep 23 |
Reply |
Darlene, please see my revision. |
Sep 24th |
11 |
Sep 23 |
Reply |
Henry, please see my revision. |
Sep 24th |
11 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
The sky in my image does look strange. So, I selected one of my cloud images and used it to replace the clouds in my original image. |
Sep 24th |
 |
11 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
The color image is okay but the mono version is outstanding. I could not believe all the detail in the mono version that I could not see in the original. I have no suggestions. |
Sep 11th |
11 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
A wonderful image. A lot of interest and very sharp. I suggest the whites should be brighter and in my version I also cropped out the small building on the far left. |
Sep 11th |
 |
11 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
An amazing image, so much better than the color version. I have no suggestions. |
Sep 11th |
11 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
A wonderful image. Great composition. A minor suggestion is to slightly increase the contrast. |
Sep 11th |
 |
5 comments - 4 replies for Group 11
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18 |
Sep 23 |
Reply |
Joan, thanks for your comments. I have made another revised image. I changed the color of the blossoms to a more natural color. I "thinned out" much of the blossoms so that they are not so thick. And, I added a more natural background in place of the clouds. I think the image is no longer creative as it is now more natural looking. I might also consider selecting just a portion of the image for a future project. |
Sep 27th |
 |
18 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
I like the combination of the lighthouse and the raging water but the spectrum colors, to me, is a distraction. Also, I feel that the foam above the boat is too heavy. I like the spray on the left side much more. |
Sep 14th |
18 |
Sep 23 |
Reply |
Ian, I am guessing that a keyline is a border. I've added a 3 pixel black border as in the attached. |
Sep 14th |
 |
18 |
Sep 23 |
Reply |
Ian, many thanks for your comments but I don't know what a black keyline is. Would you please explain? |
Sep 14th |
18 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
I really like your image. The original image of the pitcher and flowers is not interesting. But, your additional of the color layer and the twirl layer adds so much to the image. My only suggestion is to consider using a darker tone for the four corners instead of the white tone. |
Sep 10th |
18 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
You have created an interesting image with numerous shapes and patterns. But, I am bothered by the dark green area in the center of your image. My eye is drawn to that area to the exclusion of the rest of the image. Also, while there are numerous interesting shapes and patterns, they don't seem to combine to create an especially interesting image. |
Sep 10th |
18 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
A wonderful and delightful image. The color of the brollies is just perfect. And, the use of an artistic preset does so much in having the buildings not being a distraction but instead a compliment to overall image. I have no suggestions. |
Sep 10th |
4 comments - 3 replies for Group 18
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78 |
Sep 23 |
Reply |
Thanks for your comments. I will have to ask my wife what a bacon smasher is as I don't remember what it is (Can't remember? So what else is new). |
Sep 27th |
78 |
Sep 23 |
Reply |
Brenda, much improved. |
Sep 27th |
78 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
I made another revised image. I changed the color of the blossoms to a more natural color. I "thinned out" much of the blossoms so that they are not so thick. And, I added a more natural background in place of the clouds. |
Sep 27th |
 |
78 |
Sep 23 |
Reply |
Great image, big improvement. And, great idea to leave trees without being edited. |
Sep 19th |
78 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
I really like your image. The flowers are very sharp and the background is nicely blurred. I have no suggestions. |
Sep 14th |
78 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
A wonderful image and a wonderful conversion from the original. But, I feel some can be cropped off the right side. In my revision I've kept the horizontal format but cropped some off the top of the image as well as from the right side. To me I feel the composition works better when the horse is in one of the golden mean 1/3 points. |
Sep 14th |
 |
78 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
Thanks for everyone's comments. I've revised my image (Original 2) by adding a 3 pixel border. |
Sep 14th |
 |
78 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
A great image and a great conversions from the original. A minor suggestion is to crop off some of the top of the image. In my version I straightened the trees a little, lightened some of the dark area, cropped some off the top and a little off the left side and bottom. |
Sep 11th |
 |
78 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
What a wonderful image. It is amazing the effect you've created by brightening some areas and darkening other areas. The overall effect is amazing. I have no suggestions. |
Sep 10th |
78 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
A very interesting creation. But to me the sleeve is too large as it occupies about half the image and the sleeve is not the subject of the image. And, I feel the hand is too bright since the bright illumination is coming from above the hand, not below it. I made a quick revision in which I cropped much off the bottom of the image, darkened the hand, tilted the hand more upward and darkened some of the bright areas. |
Sep 10th |
 |
7 comments - 3 replies for Group 78
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16 comments - 10 replies Total
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