Activity for User 808 - Jim Hagan - jimahagan@bex.net

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11 Dec 21 Comment Wonderful image. Great composition. No suggestions. Dec 11th
11 Dec 21 Comment The capture of the mountains is great but, to me, the heavy grey fog is too distracting. I much prefer the color version but even in that photo, I feel, the fog is too heavy. I attempted to improve the fog in the color version without much success. Don't know what else to suggest. Dec 11th
11 Dec 21 Comment A wonderful image and a great conversion from color to mono. I think the image would be improved if there was something of interest in the foreground such as a close up of one of the larger plants with your wonderful background in the distance. Dec 11th
11 Dec 21 Comment A wonderful image with great leading lines. The upper left side of the image has some light area which I really like but wonder if blurring might improve the effect. Also, I would also like to see similar light areas in the upper right side as well. Well done. Dec 11th
11 Dec 21 Comment A wonderful image with great composition. My only suggestion, as already mentioned by Henry, is to lighten the dark shadow areas of the bee. Dec 11th
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18 Dec 21 Comment I love the image. The right side is not particularly interesting or needed. My only suggestion is to crop some off the right side to bring more attention to the runner. Dec 19th
18 Dec 21 Comment Very nice image. My only suggestion is to consider cropping a little tighter to focus more on the birds. Dec 19th
18 Dec 21 Comment I very much like the overall image and do agree with the comments of others to darken the road. Dec 19th
18 Dec 21 Comment Very creative. No suggestions. Dec 19th
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78 Dec 21 Comment For my original image I thought the auditorium should be in sharp focus and my family group blurred but the faces looked weird with the auditorium showing through. So, in my revision I made the faces sharp, blurred the background, cropped some off the right side and, as suggested, flipped the image horizontally.

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78 Dec 21 Reply Thank you for your suggestion. Please see my revised posting. Dec 11th
78 Dec 21 Reply Thank you for your comments. Please see my revised posting. Dec 11th
78 Dec 21 Reply Thank you for your comments. Please see my revised posting. Dec 11th
78 Dec 21 Reply Thank you for your comments. Please see my revised posting. Dec 11th
78 Dec 21 Comment A wonderful shot, great capture. I suggest a tighter crop and perhaps tilting the image somewhat clockwise. Dec 9th
78 Dec 21 Comment A very interesting image with wonderful composition. But, to me the glove touching the nose is confusing. I suggest moving the thumb of the glove away from the nose and darkening the bright areas of the background.. Dec 9th
78 Dec 21 Comment A very interesting and humorous image - no suggestions. Dec 9th
78 Dec 21 Comment A wonderful image. I think the crop and composition are great. However, to me it appears that much of the wing area is over exposed with very little detail. If the image was shot in RAW you might go back to the original and see if you can capture more detail in those areas.

The PSA nature rules include: "Techniques that enhance the presentation of the photograph without changing the nature story or the pictorial content, or without altering the content of the original scene, are permitted including HDR, focus stacking and dodging/burning."		 Dec 9th
78 Dec 21 Comment A great image with a lot of interest. MY only suggestion is to blur the background and darken the white shirts to focus more attention on the car and couple. Dec 9th
78 Dec 21 Comment A very interesting image. To me the subject is the red lighthouse as my eye keeps going back to it. So in my revision I framed the lighthouse in one of the golden mean positions but included enough of the wonderful shoreline to complement the lighthouse image and also to improve the composition. Dec 9th
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