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Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
11 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
Very nice image. Great conversion from color. No suggestions. |
Jul 8th |
11 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
I like the image a lot, so much better than the color version. I have no suggestions. |
Jul 8th |
11 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
I like the image and the great perspective. But, I am bothered by having the end of the skywalk in almost the exact center of the photo. In my revision I cropped the left side which I felt improved the composition. |
Jul 8th |
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11 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
Great photo and great conversion from color. No suggestions but do agree with Henry's. |
Jul 8th |
4 comments - 0 replies for Group 11
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18 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
Great idea, well executed. |
Jul 9th |
18 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
A wonderful image with a great conversion from color. It seems to me that the lower portion of the bridge, on both sides, are tilting inward so I straightened them. And, I also improved the boy's posture. And, finally I reversed the image, cropped some from the left side and added a little contrast. |
Jul 9th |
 |
18 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
The photo is of many duplicated images of a snake and seems to lack a center of interest. I don't know what to suggest. |
Jul 9th |
18 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
A wonderful image. Great composition. Great color. Just great! |
Jul 9th |
18 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
Wonderful image, no suggestions. |
Jul 9th |
5 comments - 0 replies for Group 18
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78 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
A great photo. My suggestion would be to crop out the solid line (branch ?) across the bottom of the image. Also, I would like to see more separation between the owls and background. To do this you would have to select just the background and reduce brightness and vibrance and then add some gaussian blur. Finally reduce noise. |
Jul 8th |
78 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
Jason, this is a very interesting shot. In my revision I added a few clouds, cloned out the tree branches, fire hydrant and a few other items. Then I cropped some off the top, perhaps too much off the right and then warmed up the sky. This wonderful image could become outstanding if you could add a figure standing in the doorway. |
Jul 8th |
 |
78 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
I like the concept, the image and your conversion. But I felt the left side of the image added little to the overall concept so in my revision I cropped it out. I also brightened the white foliage and darkened the mid tones. |
Jul 8th |
 |
78 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
Very interesting and striking image. I agree with Sunil's revision where he cloned out the detail in the large board. In my revision I cropped some off the left side to improve the composition. I also cloned out some of the pipes, darkened the board and lightened the dark areas in the vendor stalls. If possible I would like to have more sky area above the tall buildings. |
Jul 8th |
 |
78 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
A great photo. The leaning tree adds so much to the composition. And, I agree with your revision with the lightened shadow areas. |
Jul 8th |
78 |
Jul 21 |
Reply |
I forgot to mention that if the added rays were simply the result of a dodging technique it would be okay in color competition but no PSA competition allows you to add anything that was not your own creation. I am not sure about the rays being allowed in travel competitions as it alters the "feeling" of the original image, but I think the image would be better without it. |
Jul 8th |
78 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
Brenda you did a great job in capturing those white buildings - so easy to over expose. But, the large blue dome at the bottom of the image bothers me as your eye is drawn to that area instead of the rest of the image. In my revision I went back to the original photo and cropped the bottom domes out, left in some of the buildings to the left side of the original, eliminated the sun rays and also much of the noise. |
Jul 7th |
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6 comments - 1 reply for Group 78
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15 comments - 1 reply Total
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