Activity for User 808 - Jim Hagan - jimahagan@bex.net

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11 Aug 20 Comment I like the photo, the shadows and the composition. A minor suggestion is to consider adding a little height to the image and cropping some off the right side so that the image is not quite so centered. Aug 20th
11 Aug 20 Comment A very great photo with a capture at an incredible moment. A very minor suggestions is to crop the image somewhat and to add more contrast as in my suggested revision. Aug 20th
11 Aug 20 Comment What a wonderful photo - sharp, good contrast and great composition. I have no suggestions for improvement.
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11 Aug 20 Comment I like the image. The composition is great but I am bothered by the triangle and what appears to be reflections in the skylight. So in my revision I eliminated the triangle and the reflections. I also cropped some and took Sharron's suggestion and flipped the image. Aug 20th
11 Aug 20 Comment I like both the color and the mono versions. Both have a very nice composition with the upward look filled out with the surrounding leaves. I have no suggestions for improvement. Aug 20th
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18 Aug 20 Reply Okay, I guess it is distracting. See my revision below without flower. Jim Aug 25th
18 Aug 20 Reply Okay, I guess it is distracting. See my revision below without flower. Jim Aug 25th
18 Aug 20 Reply Okay, I guess it is distracting. See my revision below without flower. Jim Aug 25th
18 Aug 20 Comment Okay, I've eliminated my lovely flower. Aug 25th
18 Aug 20 Comment I like the image and the very creative composition and I agree with the other suggestions of a slight crop on the left. Aug 19th
18 Aug 20 Comment I like the image a lot and especially the background. My only suggestion is to consider eliminating the bird in the bottom left. The other three birds are all looking in the same direction while the bottom bird is not and with just 3 birds there would be a very nice circular eye movement. Aug 19th
18 Aug 20 Comment I like the image but like others I feel that the image of Mary should be more pronounced. Also, I wonder in the candle is needed in the composition - perhaps just a larger cross. Aug 19th
18 Aug 20 Comment I like the image and the composition but I do agree with the suggestion that the background should be somewhat muted.
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18 Aug 20 Comment I like the image and am amazed at your creativity. I have no suggestions for improvement. Aug 19th
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78 Aug 20 Reply Brenda, I really like your latest crop as it eliminates most of the distracting background but I would still like to see the grass in the background darker. Did you try selecting just the background and then in Photoshop go to Image, Adjustment and Levels? Then use the middle slider to darken the selection. In my revision I did only that but then reversed the selection and used the sliders to brighten just the cub and tree but not the background. Aug 25th
78 Aug 20 Comment An incredible photo with incredible detail. Great! Aug 22nd
78 Aug 20 Comment Very creative - like it. Aug 22nd
78 Aug 20 Comment I also like the mono version and I also refer just the 3 images.
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78 Aug 20 Comment A wonderful photo but as already been said it lacks contrast. I increased the contrast then dodged some areas and burned some areas and finally cropped some off the left side. Aug 20th
78 Aug 20 Comment I like this very interesting photo a lot. A minor suggestion is to crop some off the sky so that the tree line does not divide the image in half and by so doing it results in more attention to your wife. Aug 20th
78 Aug 20 Comment I like this very interesting photo a lot. A minor suggestion is to crop some off the sky so that the tree line does not divide the image in half and by so doing it results in more attention to your wife. Aug 20th
78 Aug 20 Comment A wonderful image but, in my opinion, the background is too bright. In my suggested revision I darkened the background, replaced the dark tree area in the top left with grass and then cropped the image somewhat. Aug 20th
78 Aug 20 Reply Stephen, many thanks for your creation. Aug 20th
78 Aug 20 Reply Jason you are probably right about the hallway slanting. I used a 10mm lens (15 equivalent in 35) which had a lot of distortion. I straightened everything as best I could but then made sure that one pillar was absolutely straight. Aug 20th
78 Aug 20 Reply Helen, my recollection is that I took the shot actually somewhat about the railing so that if I went back any further my image would have included the railing as well as the top of the arch. The lens was a 10mm wide angle zoom - 15mm in 35. Aug 20th
78 Aug 20 Reply Terry thanks for your suggestions. I took the kphoto on a Sunday which is why the corridor was empty. Aug 20th
78 Aug 20 Reply Thank you Sunil. Aug 20th
78 Aug 20 Reply Brenda, there was nothing left at the top of the photo. Aug 20th
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