Activity for User 808 - Jim Hagan - jimahagan@bex.net

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11 Mar 20 Comment I like Henry's version where the flower is detailed and the background dark but yet with just enough detail. Mar 16th
11 Mar 20 Comment A great shot. My only suggestion would be to consider lightening up some of the dark shadow areas as in my revision. Mar 16th
11 Mar 20 Comment I like the photo a lot and especially the composition and leading lines. I would have liked to have seen more sharpness of the stamens. Mar 16th
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18 Mar 20 Comment Very creative. I have no suggestions. Mar 16th
18 Mar 20 Comment I think the two images work well together but I wonder if the image would have more interest if cropped tighter as in my revision. Mar 16th
18 Mar 20 Comment No suggestions. Mar 16th
18 Mar 20 Comment I like the image a lot and have little to recommend except perhaps darkening the wall areas. Mar 16th
18 Mar 20 Comment I really like the image - color and composition are great. I have no suggestions. Mar 16th
18 Mar 20 Comment Many thanks for all your suggestions. I have reversed the direction of the players so that they now are marching left to right and for some reason prefer that directions. I have also changed the color of the walking surface from brown to sidewalk gray. And, I have added more blur. Mar 16th
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78 Mar 20 Comment An interesting image but suffers from the out of focus area at the bottom of the image. It was a great first try but next time use an F stop of perhaps 11 or greater. You used f3.5 which has a very limited depth of field. Mar 19th
78 Mar 20 Comment An interesting image but I feel the image is about the building reflections and that the lips don't quite fit. In my revision I brightened the image and especially the trees. Then I selected most of the buildings and made them taller and thus eliminated the lips. Mar 19th
78 Mar 20 Comment To me it seems like there are two subjects - the stairs and the bridge. In my revision I eliminated the stairs and most of the brush. I also cropped some off the left and from the sky and also darkened the sky. Mar 19th
78 Mar 20 Comment I like the image a lot, the intensity and composition. My thought would be to slightly increase the contrast of the team and darken the background a little. Mar 19th
78 Mar 20 Comment I like the image just as it is and have no suggestions. Green windows? Sure, why not? Mar 19th
78 Mar 20 Comment Thanks for your comments and suggestions. I selected the white/blue curtains and the table top and reduce their bluish cast. Richard suggested a spot needed fixing which I think was that the now white curtain did not cover all of a brown shutter which I corrected in my revision.

The image was shot with a Sony 6000 mirrorless camera with a 10mm zoom. All processing was done in Photo Shop but I don't remember which filters I used.		 Mar 16th
78 Mar 20 Comment I like the image just as it is. Nice composition. I have no suggestions.
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