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Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
11 |
Feb 19 |
Comment |
A great shot and great composition. But, like Tom, I feel the photo could be improved by dodging the dark shadow areas in the foreground to add much more detail to that portion of the photo. I also dodged some of the areas higher up in the mountains to brighten those areas. |
Feb 23rd |
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11 |
Feb 19 |
Comment |
Great photo. Great composition. I have no suggestions. |
Feb 23rd |
11 |
Feb 19 |
Comment |
An interesting subject but I am not sure about the leading diagonal line that leads to nowhere. So in my suggested revision I eliminated the diagonal line, cropped much off the bottom of the photo and then moved the bath houses closer to the pump house. |
Feb 23rd |
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11 |
Feb 19 |
Comment |
Excellent photo in mono and excellent job in removing distracting elements from the background. In my minor revision I added a little more contrast and also cropped some from the right side and bottom so that the subject was not so centered. |
Feb 23rd |
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11 |
Feb 19 |
Comment |
I much prefer the mono version but, like Allen, also felt the image is cluttered. So in my suggested revision I cropped out much of the bottles to the right. I then darkened the remaining bottles in the background and blurred them somewhat. I also felt the image was sloping clockwise so I changed the image a few degrees clockwise. |
Feb 23rd |
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11 |
Feb 19 |
Comment |
I much prefer the mono version - very nice. I do have an alternative. I like Tom's suggestion of evening out the sky which I did but then I kept the golden color of the grasses in my revision. |
Feb 23rd |
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11 |
Feb 19 |
Comment |
Many thanks for your kind comments. |
Feb 23rd |
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