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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 19 |
Oct 23 |
Comment |
Hi Bernie,
A wonderful effort at a tough shot...and you did it well! I like the red color & how you captured the bubbles. Per an earlier comment it would be interesting to see how this looked with a darker background...it might help the actual liquid pouring into the glass `pop' a bit more. Also, I wonder what this might look like with something like translucent or red syrup in the liquid...it might create more of a smoothing effect in the pour. Using food coloring in milk might accomplish this as well.
Good job!
Norm |
Oct 9th |
| 19 |
Oct 23 |
Comment |
Hi Jay,
I really like this as an abstract.The horizontal and vertical lines and shadows complement each other well. Have you also tried increasing the contrast further or darkening the shadows further to see how that might look?
A very creative image!
Norm |
Oct 9th |
| 19 |
Oct 23 |
Comment |
Hi Mel,
A beautiful photo to be treasured. The rim light and expression of your daughter are terrific. I can see why you put in the sunlight glow but I think the image does well without it also.
Wonderful job!
Norm |
Oct 9th |
| 19 |
Oct 23 |
Comment |
Hi Stan,
A beautiful image! It is tack sharp with terrific color.
A question ...I wonder if you also had images which more fully displayed the peacock's eyes?
Well Done!
Norm |
Oct 9th |
| 19 |
Oct 23 |
Comment |
Hi Harriet,
I like the deep blacks & sharp whites in this image.The shadows lend depth.
`Just two suggestions...you might want to increase your f stop to at least f5.6 or f8 so that the entire vase is in sharp focus. Also, positioning the vase so that the flowers are not moving out of the frame would help.
Good job!
Norm |
Oct 9th |
| 19 |
Oct 23 |
Comment |
Hi John,
The mood of tranquility the image conveys is great, The exposure is right on as are the colors.
A suggestion-you might want to straighten the horizon line a bit .
Norm |
Oct 9th |
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