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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 19 |
Oct 20 |
Comment |
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Oct 18th |
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| 19 |
Oct 20 |
Comment |
Thanks for all the tremendously helpful comments-much appreciated! I've attached 2 revisions-both very different approaches. I will certainly try not to be `blinded by color' in the future at the expense of composition! norm |
Oct 18th |
 |
| 19 |
Oct 20 |
Reply |
Thanks Stan . Excellent suggestions, I will give them a try. Much appreciated,norm |
Oct 11th |
| 19 |
Oct 20 |
Reply |
Thanks Marcela. A very good point! Since I live not far from this stream I will try again and see if I can avoid clipping the image. |
Oct 11th |
| 19 |
Oct 20 |
Comment |
Great shot Carroll! I agree with Marcela's comment & also you might want to consider editing out the branch on the left that is coming towards the bird.
Norm
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Oct 11th |
| 19 |
Oct 20 |
Comment |
Hi Marcela,
A lovely image...I can see why you felt like the bird was speaking with you! I like the fact that the wide aperture faded out the background drawing the viewer towards the bird. Did you also consider further cropping so there is less of the water pool showing?...I find the reflections tend to draw me away from the bird. |
Oct 11th |
| 19 |
Oct 20 |
Comment |
Hi Stan, A beautiful image! Reflections are tough to capture and I think the composition of this image does it well.I especially like the 3 layers of the image. Did you also consider perhaps open the shadows on the tree reflection in the lower right? I think this would add additional color & impact.
Norm |
Oct 11th |
| 19 |
Oct 20 |
Comment |
Hi Harriet,
Great capture...these are difficult shots to get! Did you consider further cropping up from the bottom and in from the right? This would eliminate the bright end of the branch in the lower left & also bright spot on the right. It could also bring more attention to the Dove's eye.
Norm |
Oct 11th |
| 19 |
Oct 20 |
Comment |
Hi John,
A very nice shot--to me at least it conveys a feeling of solitude.
I like the layers as broken up by the boat as well-it adds dimensionality to the image. I also like the sky color & cloud placement. `Just some thoughts: did you consider cropping up from the bottom a bit to eliminate some of the mud flats? Also, did you consider brightening the red trim on the boat to make it pop a bit more?
Norm |
Oct 11th |
7 comments - 2 replies for Group 19
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7 comments - 2 replies Total
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