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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 64 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
OK, I've had a go at that. The original picture does have a lot of mid grey in it, and trying to increase the constrast in the mid range using a curve adjustment does easily cause blown highlights and black shadows. However fiddling for a compromise, this does seem to be better! |
Oct 26th |
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| 64 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
I agree with most of the above, and would echo the comment about the white paper and the child. Also the flag obscuring much of the bearer's face is unfortunate.
However I can't agree with the comments to shoot more from the front. I like the recession and depth that this composition gives. There are few faces looking towards the camera, but the key ones mainly in profile are fine to me. A more central observation place would have had a rear view of the Colonel in the foreground which would have been less attractive I think.
Technically I think it's spot on, with detail in the snow and a little detail in the sky. Maybe a little more detail in the closer roof would be nice. Oh, and like Abhijeet's picture, there are a couple of little stowaways on the right edge (a bag?) which I'd like to see removed. |
Oct 19th |
| 64 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
There's a lot to like in this picture for me. The ripples and clouds frame the subject well. Contrast and clarity are super. There is bags of depth yet the subject is so clear and distinct. Very enjoyable.
I do agree with the "decisive moment" comments. For me, ideal would have been one man's clothing held aloft as shown, and the other one splashing into the water. So yes, sequential shooting might have got a more interesting frame.
I would suggest a little more cropping or some cloning out on the left as there are a few artifacts on the very edge of the bottom left that are distracting to me. |
Oct 19th |
| 64 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
Gosh, I had a bit of a feeling of deja vu with Gerry's picture, and I've got a strong one here. Has this subject appeared before in group 64? I seem to remember a flag pole or something that people commented on.
Anyway, that's probably my dicky memory. I do like this picture. I like the ripples and composition. I agree that the foreground is flat, but that doesn't bother me as the main subject (the building) has plenty of contrast and punch so the peripherals don't detract from the subject. Indeed I think it adds emphasis to the picture. I feel it's a pity that the extension area to the right of the main building merges into the trees on the island, and indeed the left of the building could be more distinct from the background, but my impression is that moving viewpoint would not have helped. So to me it's a job really well done. |
Oct 19th |
| 64 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
Yes, a very interesting subject I think.
They say that landscapes should contain a foreground, mid ground and background, giving recession and depth. This actually has bags of that, but I'm struggling with the transition from foreground to mid ground here. It's rather fuzzy, and indeed something recognisable in the foreground would help there together with more visual contrast between fore and mid grounds.
I agree the clouds would be great in many photos, but here they seem too strong. They are a nice backdrop, much better than a bald sky, but not the subject. |
Oct 19th |
| 64 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
Super! I like the result. My only comment would be that a silhouette of a person in the tepee would have been interesting! |
Oct 19th |
| 64 |
Oct 18 |
Reply |
Yes, I agree Don, this needs punch and it has too little in that respect. Back to Affinity etc! |
Oct 19th |
| 64 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
I've got to agree with Don (both here and in his comments on my photo) - it's rather lacking in punch. A contrast increase can help here I think.
I suppose that leads to the debate about whether all our photos should conform to the "0 to 255" model of whether the subject matter calls for a reduced range sometimes. Generally I do like 0 to 255, but I've seen some lovely flat photos which have a contrast range similar or less then this one. However I don't feel that this is one that benefits from that. |
Oct 19th |
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