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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 64 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
I like the composition of the image. You can see all the action from bottom to the top. Liked the changes you have made after getting feedback from the others. Can you do something about the tall trees in the mid ground? They are getting blended with the mountain in the back. I like them to be a bit sharp. |
Apr 18th |
| 64 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
Beautiful composition. Elements like music score and the keys are complementing each other. Branding is bit distracting but again, you do not have a choice here. A perfect study in B&W. |
Apr 18th |
| 64 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
It is a challenge to take a photograph of decaying and depressing subjects. This image of yours gives the feeling of despair and sense of time. As pointed out by other friends, you need to add a bit of contracts to bring our individual elements spread around the floor. See if you can darken a bit the two planks of the foreground. |
Apr 18th |
| 64 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
I liked this image; especially in B&W. generally we see these seascapes in all vivid colors. There is some new learning for me, like covering the lens to cut unwanted light during long exposure. As rightly pointed out by other friends, the sky needs some drama. Lighthouse is quite sharp and well exposed. I think you can crop out a bit of empty sea from the left. |
Apr 18th |
| 64 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
Another example of B&W work prevailing over its colored version. When we see an image of a butterfly, the expectation is vivid colors…. Here, your work brings out finer details of the wings which are generally subdued by the colors. Wing tips seem to be softer and blending into the background. This may be due to pronounced vignette. Also I find the top of the background flower a tad sharper and distracting. |
Apr 18th |
| 64 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
This is one picture which rightly demonstrates beauty of monochrome work. Each and every petal of the flower is clear with right amount of sharpness, shadow and highlight. Needless to say, a great learning for me…. Sometimes it is better to forgo the colors… |
Apr 18th |
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