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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 36 |
Dec 20 |
Comment |
Wellcome to our group, Krishnandu. I like the mood in your picture. It is well captured with good details in the shadow areas. In order to give more emphasise to the waterfall, I would suggest to use a grad filter on the sky to darken it slightly. By cropping out the green bush to the left and a portion of the sky, the main object will be even more emphasised. |
Dec 13th |
| 36 |
Dec 20 |
Comment |
Only an experienced photographer can take a picture like this. There is so much drama and mystique in the light I am glad that you omitted the sky. I like the highlighted spot on the wave. If I should give any suggestion, it would be to darken the dark parts in the sea to increase the contrast. |
Dec 5th |
| 36 |
Dec 20 |
Comment |
First, congratulations with your new camera! I will have one myself one day :) I like the water reflections and the narrowing line leading into the picture. I agree with Richard`s suggestion about giving some more punch to the colours. |
Dec 5th |
| 36 |
Dec 20 |
Comment |
Iceland is a fantastic place for landscape photography. I like the curved line in the mountain that leads the eyes to the top. I also like that you have dodged the light parts in the mountain. My suggestion for improvement is to crop the sky half way down to the mountain top. That will make the mountain more impressive. I would also crop about half of the distance from the right edge to the mountain side. That will give more attention to the mountain. |
Dec 5th |
| 36 |
Dec 20 |
Comment |
An impressive shot of the pine tree. The twisted shapes and mix of colours are just fantastic! I started thinking of story about the burning bush when Moses was in the desert. I felt, though, that the sky (even if it is beautiful) took some attention from the tree, so I will suggest to darken it a bit. I would also dodged the upper part of the tree so it stands more out to the sky. May be a lower camera position would given (even) more drama. At the end I would burned the hill being the tree in order to give more contrast to the tree.
As I feel this picture has a great potential, took the liberty to show you what I mean. |
Dec 5th |
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5 comments - 0 replies for Group 36
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| 74 |
Dec 20 |
Reply |
I see that you have plenty of texture at the top of the cave and I think you should bring forward some of that texture to make it clear what is happening. |
Dec 6th |
| 74 |
Dec 20 |
Comment |
I must admit that I don't quite understand what is going on here. Is the water falling in an angle? I understand that you stay inside a cave and capture the picture towards the waterfall. You have to lighten up the cave walls so the viewer understands what is happening. Apart from that, the capture is creative and interesting. |
Dec 5th |
| 74 |
Dec 20 |
Comment |
Panning takes time to learn and you have apparently done your homework, choosing the right shutter speed matching the speed of the subject and being able to move the camera correctly. Well done, Ata! |
Dec 5th |
| 74 |
Dec 20 |
Comment |
This an excellent example of the decisive moment. A perfect composition that expresses movement. At first glance I thought the ball should be darker, but I see Haru already has commented that. Did you use continuous focus and high speed exposure to catch the right moment and get it sharp?
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Dec 5th |
| 74 |
Dec 20 |
Comment |
I like your attitude; when you don't know how to solve a problem, you can at least minimise it :) In this case, it was a smart thing to crop the sky down to a minimum. I too agree with Haru´s suggestion that gives a better contrast. Just one tiny comment; the black line on top of the middle mountain is not on the original, so I think it is part of B&W editing. You may remove it my using Clone Stamp tool in Photoshop. |
Dec 5th |
4 comments - 1 reply for Group 74
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9 comments - 1 reply Total
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