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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 36 |
May 20 |
Comment |
Another beautiful picture from you. I like the composition with a distinct foreground, main motive and the background. If I should pick on something, it would be to darken the leaves on both right and left side as they take too much attention. |
May 3rd |
| 36 |
May 20 |
Comment |
Iceland is a fantastic place for photography. I have been there twice and would like to go back again one day. I like the format and the composition. If I should mention anything for improvement, it would be to darken the sky a bit and a bit more contrast in the waves. |
May 3rd |
| 36 |
May 20 |
Comment |
You got paid for becoming wet. The low clouds covering the tops of the building, made it to stand out. It works well as it is, but it could be cropped from the top and from the right to make the buildings to stand out more. The bird then had to be moved and made smaller.
Larry asked me to say something about the B/W. I must, however, emphasise that I am not an expert, just in a learning phase. I would darkened the dark parts of the clouds and lighten some of the light parts of the buildings to make more drama. Just a suggestion. |
May 3rd |
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| 36 |
May 20 |
Comment |
A fantastic picture with a thrilling story! I have no suggestion for improvements. I have never done double exposures in camera as there is a rather big chance for something goes wrong. I see you have changed the settings in the camera and then there is a possibility for moving it slightly, but it has not happened here. I just join the others prise of a well done work. |
May 3rd |
| 36 |
May 20 |
Comment |
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May 3rd |
5 comments - 0 replies for Group 36
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| 74 |
May 20 |
Comment |
It is an interesting composition. I have made a proposal for more fokus on the person, i.e. darkened the sides and lightened the ground around the lady and the umbrella. |
May 18th |
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| 74 |
May 20 |
Comment |
Thank you for your comments, guys. In particular, thank you, Ying, for taking the time to point out the small details I had overlooked.
This is a good example of how we should comment each others pictures. |
May 17th |
| 74 |
May 20 |
Comment |
A well captured moment. The composition is interesting with a diagonal line of the faces of the two wolves. There is also a triangle in the face line and the leg if extended.
My only tiny pick is to darken slightly the white area of the lower wolf. I also think that a slight darkening of the upper right corner would draw more of the attention to the wolves. |
May 8th |
| 74 |
May 20 |
Comment |
A beautiful motive and a successful conversion to B&W. I like the stairs making a leading line into the picture. It is a matter of taste, but to me it is a bit too contrasty except for the waves. |
May 5th |
| 74 |
May 20 |
Comment |
This is a good example of minimalistic photography. The diagonal line with the repeating lion heads adds strength to the composition. I would suggest to lighten the background slightly, in order to give an idea about the surroundings. Further, I will suggest to lighten the first and second head a bit and gradually tone down towards the end to make a distinct point of interest. |
May 5th |
| 74 |
May 20 |
Comment |
An interesting motive and a good camera angle. It looks like she is knitting the products she is selling. The eyes go to the lightest part that in this case is the plastic sheet in the foreground. I will therefore suggest to darken this quite a lot. Maybe, also lighten the hands and the face slightly. Apart from that, a good picture. |
May 5th |
| 74 |
May 20 |
Comment |
Nature has a lot of surprises. I have never seen anything like this before. To me, the unique is that the flower is on a tree trunk. This is not apparent on the BW photo. I therefore think it is too much cropped. I would also suggest to use a smaller aperture to get more depth of field, so the texture in the trunk is more visible. Apart from some areas on the right side of the flower, I feel it is slightly underexposed.
All in all an interesting picture. |
May 5th |
7 comments - 0 replies for Group 74
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12 comments - 0 replies Total
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