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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 36 |
Oct 19 |
Comment |
I like your cropping. It makes it stand out from the crowd. You get the impression that this is beautiful, but there is much more that you don`t see. Imagination is often better than seeing. I have no suggestions for improvement. |
Oct 15th |
| 36 |
Oct 19 |
Comment |
Iceland is a fantastic land for landscape photography. I have been there several times, but not at this spot. You have made a well-composed image with leading lines to the mountain in the background. The clouds are perfect, but I agree with the others that the foreground and the bottom of the wally should be brighter to bring out more details. |
Oct 15th |
| 36 |
Oct 19 |
Comment |
I like the way you have captured the tension between the calmness in the lower part and the dramatic storm coming at the top. I agree with Jack in correcting the perspective. It is almost like a painting. |
Oct 15th |
| 36 |
Oct 19 |
Comment |
A very beautiful landscape shot at the right moment. It is only my opinion, but I would lower the color intensity just a bit. Very well done! |
Oct 15th |
| 36 |
Oct 19 |
Comment |
You have captured this scene very well, Jyoti. The picture is full of tension. I think you could have cropped the three zebras to the right, but kept the ratio. I liked to watch the reaction of each of the zebras, some very on alert and some more relaxed. In particular, I liked the one to the left with the back to the lion. A very well captured picture. |
Oct 15th |
| 36 |
Oct 19 |
Comment |
Even if shot after dark, the image has drama. I like the blue palette that gives it calmness. If you slightly light paint i.e. make the light areas lighter and the dark area darker by using the brush in Lightroom, you may simulate some directional light.
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Oct 14th |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 36
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| 74 |
Oct 19 |
Comment |
Hi Lance,
Thank you for your encouraging words. The picture is part of an assignment in a mentor programme I am attending in Black and White Fine Art Architecture Photography. That is the reason I bought the Tilt/shift lens. It is rather expensive to buy new, so I took the chance to buy it on Ebay. I got it for less than half price and it is as good as new. It is now one of my most used lenses, not only for architecture but also for landscape and other things. I mostly use the shift function to straighten vertical lines or to get a different perspective, especially in confined places. I will also start experimenting with the tilt function to get special blur effects. I will highly recommend renting one to try it out. Arne |
Oct 14th |
| 74 |
Oct 19 |
Comment |
Hi Palmela,
For sure, you have a good eye for details! I like the repetition of the round rocks that makes a diagonal leading line. I agree with Davids suggestions. |
Oct 14th |
| 74 |
Oct 19 |
Comment |
Hi Carl,
I like the diagonal lines that make a good composition. The gradients in the middle of the picture are just great. The slight sepia tone enhances the antique feel.
I agree with David, though, that the whole picture should have been sharp and the white pole and the area beside is a bit distracting. |
Oct 14th |
| 74 |
Oct 19 |
Comment |
Hi David,
The B&W version is definitely the best. I like wawes that draw you into the picture. Well composed and great details. My only suggestion is to darken the sky as I feel it takes attention. |
Oct 13th |
| 74 |
Oct 19 |
Comment |
Hi Angela,
It is an interesting scene, but I feel it lacks some drama.
I have therefore suggested some changes in Lightroom to your image: I used the color image and converted it to monocrome and then I lovered the blue quite a lot to darken the blue sky. Further, I darkened the white sky, the castle roof and the trees and parts of the sea. I used the radial tool to lighten parts of the castle and darkened the whole picture a bit. finally, I cropped it a bit. What do you think? |
Oct 13th |
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5 comments - 0 replies for Group 74
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11 comments - 0 replies Total
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