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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 22 |
Apr 23 |
Reply |
Well, once you stop to look and study this piece, lots of different objects pop out! Your post processing really has enhanced the colors and the various dings and dents. I find the bottom edge kind of distracting where it goes off onto the ground. I think crop up just to get rid of the rectangle at the bottom center. You have a very good eye to spot this, and as the others have said, most of us would walk right by! Good work!
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Apr 17th |
| 22 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
I love your technique and your subject matter. It's a little dull I think, and needs to be brightened. Your original has more glow coming off the balloons, and that has disappeared. Perhaps a different color background - maybe a light yellow - would make those balloons really pop. Your composition is great! |
Apr 17th |
| 22 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
The ballerina needs to be positioned with her trailing leg hidden inside the center square, and also her upper hand. That way she would look as if she were coming through the frame. This is very, very creative Joe. It's very colorful and to me it resembles a quilt. |
Apr 17th |
| 22 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
I like the muted soft colors and your enhancement of the ripples. I like Jerry's comparison - if Kaylyn's is jazz, this is more symphonic. I agree with Al also - an impressionist painting. Very nicely done Mike. |
Apr 17th |
| 22 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
This is a really good example of ICM. I have tried it a few times, but mine have not been nearly as well done as yours. I like the evenness and balance of the colors. And your post processing really did create a glow. Very nice!
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Apr 17th |
| 22 |
Apr 23 |
Comment |
From a distance, this looks great. I think I would reduce the opacity of the effect to allow just a little more of a focal point. Maybe reduce the effect just on the rider. But this is a great way to use an image that is not very sharp. I like your method - I've never used the liquid pencil. I need to try it!
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Apr 17th |
| 22 |
Apr 23 |
Reply |
Yes the bubbles coming up through the iris is the way I saw it. Kind of like rising up out of a champagne flute. |
Apr 17th |
| 22 |
Apr 23 |
Reply |
I like the bubbles too. I just didn't think there was a subject there. But maybe that doesn't matter with an abstract?? What do you think? |
Apr 17th |
5 comments - 3 replies for Group 22
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5 comments - 3 replies Total
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